Essay on Choosing a Field of Study

by Bhagyashree
(Mumbai)

Education Institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.


To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Education is as vital and as food and shelter. It plays an important role in moulding one's career. In recent times, a lot of students couldn't pursue their career through their relevant field of study due to lack of proper guidance. In this essay I would give my viewpoints on the significance of education Institutions handling this delicate issue.

Education Institute need not only impart education but create awareness among the students about various careers relating to their field of interest. To begin with, schools should conduct activities to bring out the talent of a child and demonstrate careers related to it. In addition to it, they should involve their parents to support them and conduct regular counseling sessions for them.

Secondly, every institutions should compulsorily announce scholarship seats. It helps in forming batches with real talents. These people surely brings fame to the institutes and every Institutes look forward for the same.

Finally, the most debated point of recent time is to eradicate quota based admissions for minority sections of Society. Eventually, by doing this, most eligible student can get to study and not the one who enters through some quota.

On the other hand, we will find many education Institutions corrupt. Unlike, other countries, Indian reputed schools demand donations and high fees , which a middle and lower middle class set of people cant afford. However, many of them after completion of their secondary school, they opt for courses depending upon their fee paying capacity and not their caliber. This situation have made thousands of students bury their dreams.

To conclude, Education Institutions can make or break one's career. Its regarded a holy place for every student and any step taking by the Institute impacts the students life. So, providing the right guidance to its every students should be their prime focus, this can bring prosperity to the society as a whole.

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Aug 15, 2015
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Intro
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I think your position is not clear in the introduction whether you clearly agree that the education institutions dissuade the students or not??

In the 1st paragraph
Not only ....but also

Aug 20, 2015
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Deviation from the topic
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The topic is, measures to be taken by educational institutions to discourage students taking the subjects in which they are unlikely to succeed. Although the usage of vocabulary and grammar is good, the response is completely deviated from the topic.

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