Essay on Education and Development

by Keyla Simoes
(Praia Grande, São Paulo, Brazil)

Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor to development of a country.


To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


Education is analyzed as being an important role in the society, where the structure of teaching, learning, and environment is frequently debated as factor (main) responsible for the development of people. This is why education system, and the structure for teaching shall be considered seriously.

Regardless of their background, parent’s income or any other factors. It is right say that a good education for all children is important, as well as the role of government is essential, due to factor of have the major responsibility to give support, and offer to every child an educational opportunity through of public school system. Educated people make an educated nation, as well as education allow us to open our minds to improve ourselves, our environment, our world, and to make educated choices about our future. Through of education, the students have more opportunities to improve their skills, and also gain more knowledge in their professional field. And, in respect of country obtain a good development social, and economical, a good education system is needed.

Have a good education system, the schools, institutes, and universities need obtain a good structure of learning, and teaching for children, and students. The main role of structure of teaching, and learning became complex, where great majority of society think that, the schools are major responsible for teaching, and learning of students. Nevertheless, parents, and society, must work as whole, having as result of make them prepared for the society. The structure of environment at schools given to the students, should occur healthy, not just physically, but also mentally, and socially. The comfort, is required and, the classes must be well ventilated, and large enough to accommodate the students, and even though some schools obtain smaller classes, is essential obtain small group of students, then teacher will have more flexibility for teaching, and give individual attention to them.

In conclusion, to have a good education system, the society and government must work as whole, because the future of society and progress of country is comparatively reflected by the success of students in their education.

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(PS: Please if someone can give a feedback, I will be grateful. Can correct me in any sentence. Thanks)

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