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Airline Travel Essays 
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Global Warming Essays 
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Animal Experimentation Essays 
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Multiculturalism Essay 
In multi-cultural societies, people of different cultural backgrounds live and work together. Do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies …

Co-education Essays 
Some people think that this is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending …

Learning a Foreign Language Essays 
Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages …

Preservation of Historic Buildings Essays 
Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important …

Essay on Borrowing Money from a Friend 
It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? To have good friend is …

International Relations Essays 
The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead. To what extent …

Childcare Essays 
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Essay on Change 
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Parenting Skills Essays 
Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculums. Others think that it is not essential for students. …

Nuclear Power Essays 
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Arts Essays 
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To …

Success Essays 
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IELTS Essay - Focusing on products and brands 
Some people focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use. Do you think this behavior has more advantages than disadvantages. It is …

Traffic and Transport Essays 
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other …

Museum Essays 
It is said by some people that museums an meant for entertainment. On the other hand, some people say that they are only meant for education. Discuss …

Caring for the Elderly Essays 
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Crime Essays 
Many people are too scared to leave their home because of a fear of crime. Some people think that more should be done to prevent crime, whereas others …

Sports Essays 
Hi Guys it is my first time to share my writing. Need to score a 7 so any help or comment to improve my writing will be really appreciated. Cheers ---------------------- …

Leisure Time Essays 
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Essay on Youth and Sports Competitions 
Some people believe that sport competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in …

The Use of Public Parks Essay 
Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population …

Child Development Essays 
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Changes in Society Essays 
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Employment and Older People Essays 
It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers …

Company Decision Making Essay 
Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision making …

Modern Technology Essays 
In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication …

The advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city 
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city. Nowadays, large cities are becoming more and more inhabited. The majority of …

Food and Health Essays 
Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree? Nutritionists have advised of eating a balanced …

Child Labour Essays 
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree …

Home Schooling Essays 
Could you grade my home schooling essay? Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think …

IELTS Essay: Teenagers working while studying 
Please provide feedback on this essay: It is a good idea for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students. To what extent do you agree …

Community Service Essays 
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving …

Computer Essays 
Can you please give your feedback on this essay? Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree …

University Essays 
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Advertising Essays 
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Space Exploration Essay 
Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion? In many countries, a big …

Moral Values Essays 
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas …

Essay on Choosing a Field of Study 
Education Institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. To what extent …

Obesity Essays 
The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this due to problems such as the growing of number of fast food …

Cosmetic Surgery Essays 
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Freedom of Speech Essays 
Can someone please review and give a possible band score for my freedom of speech essay. Thank you:) Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? …

Television and Children Essays 
Can someone rate my task two television and children essay? Thanks. Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do …

Choice of Subjects at University Essay 
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that …

Essay on the Best Age for Happiness 
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Other people think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite …

Zoo Essays 
Some people believe zoos, where wild animals are kept in a man-made environment, should no longer exist in the twenty century. Do you agree or disagree? …

Environmental Problems Essays 
Water Scarcity Water resources around the world are getting scarce. Discuss the causes and solutions. Fresh water has a fundamentally beneficial …

Essay on Studying the Past at School Not rated yet
To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to learn the past? What will be the effect …

Essay on Education and Development Not rated yet
Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this …

Nature Nurture Essays Not rated yet
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes …

Immigration Essays Not rated yet
More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing, and medicine. …

Globalisation Essays Not rated yet
In some countries, minority languages are disappearing. Some people say that governments should save languages. Others disagree. Discuss both views …

Mobile Phone Essays Not rated yet
There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree the problems of mobile …

Health Education Essays Not rated yet
Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals …

Housing Essays Not rated yet
Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? It …

Work and Career Essays Not rated yet
Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to …

Advantages and Disadvantages of Travel to Remote Natural Environments Not rated yet
Nowadays, scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this …

Rewarding Students on Achievements or Improvements Essay Not rated yet
Some people think only students who get the best academic results should be rewarded. Other say that students who show improvements be rewarded? Discuss …

Capital Punishment Essays Not rated yet
By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. …

Prison Essays Not rated yet
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of …

Internet Essays Not rated yet
According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of …

Music Essays Not rated yet
Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses …

Working Women Essays Not rated yet
Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies …

IELTS Task 2 - Banning Hunting Not rated yet
I would like to know how many point can i get if i do the essay like this? any mistake that i need to correct? People have differing view on whether …

Can someone give me feedback on this Compulsory Military Service Essay? Not rated yet
Can anyone please tell me how much will i possibly score in writing with below essay? Many countries have compulsory military service for men after …

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