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IELTS Essay - Computer Images Replacing Museums and Galleries 
Hi IELTS buddies, Please help me review my essay. Thank you very much. Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical …

Language Essays 
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Working for a Multinational Organisation Essay 
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Culture Essays 
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion? …

IELTS Power of the Media Essay 
Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you …

IELTS Essay Alcohol Selling Age Restrictions 
Hi friends! can you estimate my writing essay plz Alcohol is sold in many countries only to people who are above 21. Is it a positive or negative …

Animal Cruelty Essays 
Could u please tell me that how much would I get for this essay? A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that …

Airline Travel Essays 
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Global Warming Essays 
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Space Exploration Essay 
Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion? In many countries, a big …

Essay on the Best Age for Happiness 
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Other people think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite …

Child Development Essays 
Hi there, I was hoping to get a band 7 and above. Thank you all in advance for the kind help with this child development essay! Some people think …

Changes in Society Essays 
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Animal Experimentation Essays 
Testing on animals is common practice for products such as cosmetics or drugs. Some people regard testing on animals as completely wrong and inhumane …

Co-education Essays 
Some people think that this is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending …

Moral Values Essays 
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas …

Zoo Essays 
Some people believe zoos, where wild animals are kept in a man-made environment, should no longer exist in the twenty century. Do you agree or disagree? …

Learning a Foreign Language Essays 
Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages …

Education System Essays 
Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this …

Preservation of Historic Buildings Essays 
Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important …

Employment and Older People Essays 
It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers …

Environmental Problems Essays 
Water Scarcity Water resources around the world are getting scarce. Discuss the causes and solutions. Fresh water has a fundamentally beneficial …

Nature Nurture Essays 
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes …

Immigration Essays 
More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing, and medicine. …

Globalisation Essays 
In some countries, minority languages are disappearing. Some people say that governments should save languages. Others disagree. Discuss both views …

Modern Technology Essays 
In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication …

International Relations Essays 
The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead. To what extent …

Childcare Essays 
Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think …

Mobile Phone Essays 
There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree the problems of mobile …

Health Education Essays 
Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals …

Housing Essays 
Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? It …

Work and Career Essays 
Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to …

Tourism Essays 
Nowadays, scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this …

Capital Punishment Essays 
By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. …

Prison Essays 
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of …

Essay on Change 
Some people prefer to spend lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both …

Internet Essays 
According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of …

Parenting Skills Essays 
Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculums. Others think that it is not essential for students. …

Music Essays 
Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses …

The advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city 
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city. Nowadays, large cities are becoming more and more inhabited. The majority of …

Food and Health Essays 
Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree? Nutritionists have advised of eating a balanced …

Nuclear Power Essays 
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh …

Obesity Essays 
The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this due to problems such as the growing of number of fast food …

Arts Essays 
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To …

Child Labour Essays 
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree …

Success Essays 
Hello, friends please give some feedback for this success essay. Do I need some changes on this or not? Success means the desire was strong enough. …

Working Women Essays 
Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies …

Home Schooling Essays 
Could you grade my home schooling essay? Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think …

Cosmetic Surgery Essays 
Thank you for reading my cosmetic surgery essay. I hope to receive comments from all of you. If possible, please score my essay based on IELTS Writing …

Traffic and Transport Essays 
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other …

Museum Essays 
It is said by some people that museums an meant for entertainment. On the other hand, some people say that they are only meant for education. Discuss …

Caring for the Elderly Essays 
Hi, Can someone please check this Caring for the Elderly Essay. Thank you! In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with …

Community Service Essays 
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving …

Crime Essays 
Many people are too scared to leave their home because of a fear of crime. Some people think that more should be done to prevent crime, whereas others …

Freedom of Speech Essays 
Can someone please review and give a possible band score for my freedom of speech essay. Thank you:) Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? …

Computer Essays 
Can you please give your feedback on this essay? Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree …

University Essays 
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Sports Essays 
Hi Guys it is my first time to share my writing. Need to score a 7 so any help or comment to improve my writing will be really appreciated. Cheers ---------------------- …

Compulsory Military Service Essay 
Can anyone please tell me how much will I possibly score in writing with below essay? Many countries have compulsory military service for men after …

Advertising Essays 
Hello Friends, I am practicing for my General writing task 2 and below is one of the essay. Please help me with your feedback. Thanks Some people …

Television and Children Essays 
Can someone rate my task two television and children essay? Thanks. Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do …

Leisure Time Essays 
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