IELTS Line Graph - Australian Fast Food Consumption

by Ala
(Oxford United Kingdom )


The graph illustrates, the changes in Consumption of fast food by the Australian Teenagers, including three types of food, Pizza, Fish and chips and Hamburgers, between 1975 and 200 . A period time of 25 year.

In 1975, there was an increase in each of Pizza and Hamburgers except the Fish and Chips went down. In 1980, It's still the same as before, for the Pizza and Hamburgers expect Fish and Chips still dropped down slowly as which shows in the graph. From 1985 to 1990 the Fish and Chips decline for about 30 per-cent and Pizza and Hamburgers still rise From 20 per-cent to 40 per-cent for Pizza and 57 per-cent for Hamburgers which demonstrates in the graph below. From 1995 to 2000 as we see the Pizza and Hamburgers still steady remains as the same number of times eaten per year. I think if the people didn't make any solution for this problem may Fish and Chips well not go make again.

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Mar 06, 2017
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Need to rewrite
by: Anonymous

1. Lack a clear overview
2. The language used in IELTS writing should be formal, meaning no contraction ( it's -> it is)

3. "I think if the people didn't make any solution for this problem may Fish and Chips well not go make again." This sentence is incomprehensible. Moreover, personal pronounce should be avoided in IELTS writing .

4. Missed key features, like which type of fast food was the most popular, least popular, and how they changed over the years.

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