Rewarding Students on Achievements or Improvements Essay

by Hasan mustafa
(Brisbane,QLD, Australia )

Some people think only students who get the best academic results should be rewarded. Other say that students who show improvements be rewarded?


Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.


It is indisputable that rewards and incentives motivate individuals to keep working for better results and improvement. Students, particularly need this motivation to concentrate and keep focused in their studies. That is the only possible way by rewarding them for their achievement and efforts no matter whether they are higher score achiever or students who show improvement in their studies.

Student of all level try to improve when they have a feeling that their hard work is going to be appreciated. Many universities and colleges have rewards and scholarships programs so that student can feel appreciated for the efforts they have made. Consequently, these little incentives and rewards play an indispensable role later in their career and practical life.

On the other hand, many student also drop out from schools and universities just because they are not appreciated and encouraged to work hard so that they keep focused until they complete their studies. However, most of the time, average and weak students are discouraged and bullied in schools and universities. As a result, they decide to drop out and give up. Consequently, they end up doing work in factories as a labor with the feeling of inferior complex.

Universities and schools are required some amendments in their policies to address these issues and take appropriate steps in well and balanced manner to reward all students since everyone has a right to have a better career.

In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that all student must be appreciated for their achievements and encourage to work hard so that they can contribute to the world’s economies by being well educated individuals.

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