The Causes of Living Alone Essay

by yohannes

In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone.

What are the causes of this?

Now a days many people are victim of lonely. The main cause of this is the daynamic change of the way of living of the society. The cultural revolution leads the people to think individually and forget the nessecity of their society for a while. Gradually this happens for some of them for life time, which is from my opinion disaster.

Economic issue has the major impact in causing people to live alone. Specially youngster are mainly affected, and after they left home the struggle to survive and they found it not easy, So they decide to ensure economically their future first before finding couple.

As living cost increases and work vacancies are limited this situation will carry on.

Global conflicts and immigration are also the one who rises lonely. In fact many people are forced to live their home and family back. integration of many obstacles shapes them to feel and live alone. It seems to be acceptable if you are already immigrate,and obvious you have to face it, but really hard as I experienced.

Therefore, the complexity of life and current situation are particularly affecting and causing living alone.

In my opinion the solution is easy and ever one can apply it. That is love. love your self and love your sarounding.


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Apr 02, 2015
by: Anonymous

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Apr 08, 2015
The Causes of Living Alone Essay
by: Anonymous

Hey buddy,

Try to improve on your spelling ang punctuation and when to use upper case.

Apr 13, 2015
more coherent
by: jahir


I think you made some writing mistakes such as:

disaster - must be - a disaster
nessecity - necessity
the struggle - they struggle
are also the one - are also de the ones
to live- to leave (that has more sense)

Also, I think the overall essay needs to be more coherent. You only wrote 214 words not 250. The task is to give reasons instead of opinions. Then i think you should not give your opinion.


Apr 14, 2015
tnx - The Causes of Living Alone Essay
by: Anonymous

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