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Jun 18, 2015
not bad but
by: band 6 pls:gez.samuel400@gmail.com

even if i am worse than him in writing; i can see some problems in the essay like the use of punctuations, poor argument style...or in short i feel as if some thing is missing in the essay.

Jun 19, 2015
It's fine
by: Shahira

I feel that there is some repetition information wise

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