Essay on Change

by Svetlana
(Russian Federation)

Some people prefer to spend lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that people perceive change in different ways. Some members of the community believe that change is always for the better, while others think otherwise.

Those who are in favor of change may argue that it poses a possibility for a particular person to improve him- or herself, both mentally and socially. From the mental perspective, changes relating to traveling and receiving education help one broaden one's mind and learn something new. As for the social perspective - it is empathy for others that he or she may acquire after suffering changes in his or her private life, because it is known that those who experienced various changes in relationships with their family or acquaintances may then better understand other people's feelings. This way, change improves not only person's mental, but also social and private aspect.

In contrast, those who avoid changes point out the difficulties to readapt to them that many people experience. For instance, some large companies, Finnair for example, practice giving professional psychological and medicine support to those employees who were sacked due to companies' structural changes. Apparently, such policies infer that a spate of people may suffer from the difficulty to accustom to the changes and find their new way in life. In addition, it can be pointed out that changes regarding private affairs not always make a person better. For many people such changes simply cause a nervous breakdown, and, again, may jeopardize their health, since psychological aspect of a person is tightly connected to his or her general well-being.

In conclusion, my view of the problem is that change is an indispensable part of our lives, so people should accept this fact and try to learn how to tackle it rather than avoid it, which is impossible.

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Mar 01, 2015
Environmental Changes
by: Anonymous

Changes are inevitable in the environment as technological and economic advancements create more challenges for people to adapt to. As we adapt we must not compromise our beliefs and principles although we may face pressures to comply.

Mar 02, 2015
by: Anonymous

it is quite good article in balanced manner,

Sep 28, 2015
not bad
by: Anonymous

its not bad because im Azebaijan highschoolgirl and our teachers didnt undestand what i take this text/essay from internet\web
still 4 stars its will be gooder
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Dec 30, 2015
essay on change
by: Aisha

I like it, it changed my life

Mar 26, 2016
by: Dhananjaya

Yea , it's nice .. change is important to survive our life

Aug 20, 2017
by: abhinav

superb essay

Oct 19, 2017
Impressive Oratory Skills
by: Anonymous

It is fine how you write, but I think that you did not fully and carefully treat the theme. You only saw it from a far perspective and very seriously, which makes it seem cold. You should have tried to go to the insides of the problem.
Other than that, I took pleasure in reading your work. Thank you for sharing it with us! :-)

Dec 10, 2017
by: Anonymous

It's right that changes are important but some close minded people are not ready to accept it.

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