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May 31, 2015
punctation
by: Luna

I was wondering about punctation. Very long sentences and no breaks?

Jun 09, 2015
My advice
by: Helen

I don't think this essay can be marked higher than 6.

There are grammar mistakes, coherence and cohesion are weak as well. I recommend the author to do IELTS preparation course.

I have been teaching English in Ukraine for 15 years, but my overall band was only 7,5. I want to be registered as a teacher in Australia, where I am living now, so I need better results.

IELTS exam is very tricky, and I advise everyone to take it more seriously. Don't believe those who say you can pass it with satisfactory results after a month preparation. There are some students in my group who are very smart, but have already taken this exam 13 times.

Sorry if I discouraged you in some way, I just want you to have a more realistic picture.

Good luck to you.
Best wishes,
Helen.

Jun 09, 2015
thanks
by: Anonymous

Thank you for your sincerity

Sep 22, 2015
answer
by: Raluca

No problem

Jun 24, 2016
gud
by: sahil khan

Hmm your essay is his I impress from this but I want to know about 10 GuD or bad effect On young generation

Dec 20, 2016
thanks
by: Anonymous

Thank you for your sincerity.

Apr 17, 2017
thank
by: Anonymous

It's good. Thank you.

May 12, 2017
Good Natural Expression
by: Anonymous

This essay has good level of vocabulary and phrase usage - good natural expressions.

Aug 25, 2017
More Content - Modern Technology Essays
by: Anonymous

One can also add the role of technology in different fields like medical stream, agriculture, scientific and alike and adding some examples may add it more of content. Vocabulary is good.

Aug 18, 2018
structure
by: Anonymous

'does not control anymore these gadgets'
That does not make sense.

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