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Jan 15, 2017
Family communication Essay
by: Anonymous

I totally agree with you on both points in focus especially on indulgence into the virtual world.

Jan 15, 2017
Family communication
by: Anonymous

Simple and straight to the point

Feb 09, 2017
Feedback
by: Anonymous

I think your points are really great and you clearly organised it well, making your essay easy to follow. I think you just have some awkward phrases here and there but then again I didn't do too well in my writing part so don't trust me on this one.

I got the exact same question in my test! And I unfortunately didn't get the mark that I wanted.

I was curious, what mark did you receive?

Mar 14, 2017
Structure
by: Anonymous

introduction - Well paraphrased
Thesis - Clear
Outline - Clear
Topic sentence I - Well Supported
Topic sentence II - Well Supported
Conclusion - Main points summarized

comment-Good essay band 7.5

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