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Jun 30, 2014
8 bands
by: Anonymous

great. i couldnt find a mistake. keep it up

Aug 04, 2014
NICELY PORTRAYED
by: Anonymous

I THINK YOU WERE GOOD OVERALL, BUT THERE CAN BE ALOT OF ISSUES THAT CAN BE EXPLAINED IN OUR DAILY LIFE TOO.
SO THAT YOU CAN CONVEY YOUR MESSAGES WITH EASE.

Sep 15, 2015
Correction
by: Anonymous

Hi!

I've taken the liberty of correcting your essay. Unfortunately there is no way to highlight the mistakes in red, so you'll have to read and compare to what you have written.

However, some people argue that people today do not suffer from as much stress as they did in the past when the concept of stress did not exist

To begin with, people in modern societies tend to have numerous concerns whilst pursuing a high standard of living

Employees are forced to work longer hours, which results in a large amount of stress

Common today's mental illnesses, resulting from stress such as bipolarity, eating disorder, social anxiety did not exist.


Sep 05, 2016
4/5
by: Anonymous

a pretty good essay

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