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Apr 21, 2015
no clear relationship or distinction between the two
by: Prince MacDonald

In your piece you didn't specify or give a direct relation between technology and cultural values. For example you could talk about one cultural value and how technology has taken over or otherwise.i think that would been much better.....thank you

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