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IELTS Letter: Degree Completion

by Hafsa
(Karachi )

Write a letter to your friend, telling him/her about your degree completion and further academic plans. In your letter:

- Tell your friend that you have completed your bachelor’s degree.
- Explain your plans for further study abroad and any concerns you have.
- Ask your friend for help or advice regarding finding a part-time job.

Dear friend,

Sending you warm wishes from Pakistan, I hope you're doing well in abroad. I'm really happy to know about your promotion and wishing you more success in your future.

You would be glad to know that I have completed my bachelor's degree and persue my career in Germany. I got an admission in university of Germany for masters degree program. I am excited to continue my journey as well as to take such a big step of my life although concern on account of funding of university and daily expenses. I have limited amount barely enough to survive and looking for a part time job.

I solicited of your support to inquire vancancies in nearby stores. It contributes great help in my career an I Will be sincerely appreciate your help.

Regards,
Hafsa

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Jun 28, 2026
 Letter to a friend
by: Anonymous

Dear Raza,
I hope this letter will find you in the best of health and spirits. Congratulations on your recent success. You really made us proud of yourself.
You will be delighted to know that I have completed my bachelor degree in English Literature and would like to pursue the teaching profession in the coming years. As you know I aways dreamt to be an educationist and now I am quite near to my dream profession. I always love and adore kids and soon l will be with them mentoring and guiding them.
What are you doing these days in your holidays? I will recommend you to come to my place and together we will have the best time.
Regards,
Zaid

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