by amin sad
You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
- Say how you feel about his performance
- Give details of your musical activities
- Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Mr. smith
I am writing to let you know how much I enjoyed the performance you put on on October 12 in the city of Denver. I have followed your career since 2010 and seeing you perform live in front of a crowd was such a blessing.
My friends and I have been covering your songs in my friend’s basement since high school. We even performed some of your songs on our prom night. Then we decided to start a band.
We wrote a few songs and we recorded them in one of our local studios. We even won a local talent show. Hopefully when we receive the cash award, we will be able to record more songs.
I have attached a CD containing some of our songs and few live performances we gave in local bars. It would mean I lot to us if you listened to them and gave us some feedback. Should you like our work, maybe you could send our demos to your label manager. If he ever decides to sign us, it is a dream come true.
Again I express my gratitude for choosing Denver for having a concert. It was an unbelievable show, especially for me because I am a huge fan. Thank you in advance for listening to our demos.
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