IELTS Letter to a Friend

by Gagan
(Amritsar)

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend.

- Say why a driving license is advantageous
- Recommend a driving school
- Give extra guidance/ tips


Dear Albert

I am glad to hear that you have decided to learn driving. The idea of learning to drive will definitely change your life.

But firstly, you need to have driving license which can be a way round to remove all the restrictions to drive anywhere with freedom. You will be independent in handling routine tasks for instance office, shopping etc. Moreover it is a social and legal responsibility of being an ideal citizen.

Secondly, you need to search a good driving school with supportive & experience instructors. I would like to recommend the Hall Driving School in the down town. I, myself, have learnt from this renowned driving school. All the instructors are well trained and experienced professionals. The medium of instructions include both theoretical as well as practical aspects. Moreover, you will also learn the traffic rules as well which are the foremost important in today’s life.

To become proficient in all aspects you have to appear for an exam to test you knowledge of driving before obtaining license. I think, a two –week course will be sufficient for you to be perfect and clear the driving trust.

I hope my advice will serve the purpose. Looking forward to hear from you.

Love,
Robert

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Apr 29, 2019
Great
by: Anonymous

Love it

Jun 02, 2019
Informal letter
by: Anonymous

Dear Neha,

Hope you are doing well. Thanks for seeking my advice before you start your driving lessons. I am too happy to know that finally you agreed to learn driving.

Let me explain you why driving license is important and beneficial to have. As you are planning for further studies in Canada, you can purchase your own car and commute by that. So driving license is mandatory in that case. If you don’t have DL, you won’t be able to own a car. Also in many places you can show your DL as ID proof.

I would also suggest you to join Zahir Driving School which is near your place. Many of my friends have learnt driving from that place. Specifically book Mr. Zen as your coach; I have heard good reviews about him. Just a month class, and then you would be easily able to drive car by yourself.

Won’t you like to have some extra tips from me? So here it goes.. Always put your street belt while you drive car. Also make sure that person sitting in the front seat have put street belt. Never drive car at high speed. Last but not the least do follow traffic signals and sign boards while driving.

Share with me your experience of driving lessons.

Enjoy!Stay in touch.

Shruti

Jul 19, 2019
IELTS Letter to a Friend
by: Anonymous

Write a letter to your friend who is interested in learning how to drive. In your letter

 Say why a driving license is advantageous
 Recommend a driving school
 Give any extra guidance /tips


Word count- 180

Dear Tom,

I hope you're doing well! I'm just writing to let you know about the fundamentals of driving a vehicle.

As you know the driving license is a must while driving any vehicle. There are the number of benefits of having the driving license, which enables you to drive your car independently anytime anywhere. As this will not only saves you time but also more convenient than travelling through public transport.

You may join the Expert Driving school as this is the oldest school in the town and all of their drivers are very kind and helpful to everyone learning this skill. This school also provide a special weekend class for working professionals, which I think suits you the best.

Would you have the traffic rules book in your home? If you don't have the book, let me know I'll send you mine. The book is having complete information about the different traffic rules and signals, which are essential to learn for driving safely without breaking any traffic law.

Let me know if you need any further help.

Your friend,
Jack

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Moving to a New House

by Mojisola
(Nigeria)

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking Friend. In your letter:

- Explain why you have moved
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him to pay a visit.



Dear Kola,

Trust you are good, hope you have settled down at work.

I am writing you to inform you that I have finally moved from my old house. As mentioned to you in my last letter to you, My Landlady wanted to renovate the house hence she gave her tenants six months notice to move out of the house.

I was lucky, I got an apartment not to far from my son's school and my place of work. The apartment cost less and it is way bigger than my previous apartment.

I particularly like this apartment because its has a big kitchen with an in-built dish washer and a lovely terrace where my son can play with his friends.

I am confident that you will love my new home. I hope you and your daughter, Dara will come to visit us soon.

Looking forward to seeing you.

Mojisola

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Sep 11, 2018
Sounds to formal
by: Alex

The usage of "Hence", which is a high-end and old-fashioned is absolutely inappropriate in informal letters.

The overall feel of this letter is like semi-formal one written to a friend.

Not a perfect sample to use as a guidance unfortunately...

Sep 13, 2018
Sounds to formal
by: IELTS buddy

The letters here are not guidance from this site. They are written by students practicing for the test who have submitted them for comments.

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IELTS Letter - Selling a TV

by ADIL - adilalaamri96@gmail.com
(Oman)

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain:

1. Why you are selling the television

2. Describe the television

3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it


Hey my friend, how are you? I hope you're good. I sent these letter to you to inform you that I want to sell my T.V, so I thought I suppose to ask you first I you want to bay it.

I bought a new T.V last week, it’s a new model that it came recently to the shops, it’s a smart T.V which means you can touch the screen as the smart phones. So, I think I don’t need for my old T.V because there is no space for it.

Now here are some details about the old T.V perhaps you want to bay it. It’s an original one which had made by a very famous electronic company called LG, I think you know it. It has a built in receiver and DVD so you don’t need to buy them. Also it has to remotes, one for the receiver and other one for the DVD.

You have the choice if you want it or not. I won’t ask to another person to buy it until I receive your answer. I’ll wait for until next Sunday which going to be the 3rd of March.

Yours,

Adil

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May 11, 2018
Stupid letter
by: Anonymous

There are many mistakes in this.

May 16, 2019
Errors
by: Anonymous

There are a lot of mistakes. The structures are not arranged properly.

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IELTS House Sitting Letter

by Vadim Klimenko
(Baku)

Dear ielts buddy, please give feedback on my IELTS Task 1 General Training Letter

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties

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Dear Shamil,

Thank you very much for confirming your readiness to take care of my house and dog. I really appreciate your help as it makes my trip much more comfortable.

Please be informed that I will be in London till June 15th and you can call my UK cell number. In the mid of June I plan to fly to Chicago, so please send me a message via whatsapp if you have any question then.

As I said earlier, it's required to walk with the dog, Sher, at least on early mornings and on evenings. You may take the dog to the small park near the Baku-Astrakhan friendship monument or to the boulevard if you have time for longer walk. The dog food is on the bottom shelf of the refrigirator. Please give no more than one can of the food per day to Sher. I also want to ask you to water all flowers twice per week. The only exception is the flower at the kitchen, which doesn't require water at all. In the case if you find any utility bill in the post-box, just place it on my table.

Thanks again for agreeing to help me with these duties. I will be happy to do the same for you when you go for your holidays to Rio.

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Moving House

by Shamim Raihan
(Dhaka, Bangladesh)

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking Friend. In your letter:

- Explain why you have moved
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him to pay a visit.


Dear John,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to let you know that we moved to a new place last month.

There are a range of reasons behind moving to a new address. First of all, you know I have changed my job recently so the new job location was very far from my old address. It is now very convenient from my new home. Secondly, my parents come from Australia and will be living with us from now on. So, It became very difficult to accommodate 4 people in our old place. That’s why we needed to shift.

You will be happy to see our new apartment.It is on the sixth floor of a ten story building. We have 2 master bedrooms and a small bedroom. In addition to that, It has 2 washrooms, a kitchen and a huge living room where we watch TV.I must not forget to say, my bedroom has a beautiful view of a park outside. Most importantly this apartment has a lot of open space that we love most.

Last but not least, please pay as a visit anytime soon. We will love to see you here. I bet you will not regret the visit.

Please let me know when you are coming. I will look forward to hearing from you.

Yours,
Sam

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Selling a Television

by Yumi
(SP, Brazil)

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter:

- Explain why you are selling the television
- Describe the television
- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it


Dear John,

6 months ago I bought a brand new LG 42' LCD screen television since, at that time, I was moving to a new house and wanted all my stuff to be new: this TV was placed in my living room along with my new sound system. I had one TV and brought it with me, too, but I decided to put it in my room. That one is not so modern but it has wi-fi connection, so it suits my needs.

It happens that all the expenses with my moving were beyond my plans and I ended up deciding to sell this new TV to make some extra money. When thinking about someone that could have it, you came to my mind. I remember that you were after a 4K TV with integrated wi-fi connection and lots of HDMI slots and mine does have all of that! Besides, it is so lightweight that even your little brother can carry it.

I know you are around town this month, so why don’t you come over and have a look at it? I’ll be at home all day long on weekends. If you want to stop by on weekdays, just let me know. I can make it after 18PM if you wish. We can agree on a great price.

Let me know what you think! Call me on my phone of text me.

Mary.

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Help from a Friend Abroad

by Deeuce


You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

- give details of your study plans
- explain why you want to get a part-time job
- suggest how your friend could help you find a job


Dear Josh,

Warm greetings from Nepal. I hope you are doing well. I am really happy to know about your promotion recently and wish you very best in your future endeavors.

You would be happy to know that I have been accepted to southern Illinois University Edwardsville for the Masters in Marketing Research program. I am excited as well as concerned to take such a big step in my life, especially for the reason of funding. I have very limited funding available from my school - barely enough to stay - and thinking of looking for a part time job. I can earn for my food and other expenses and spend some during good-times when visiting your place.

I was hoping if you could inquire in some of the stores nearby for job vacancies at your convenience. I will much appreciate your help and can't wait to see you soon.

Warm Regards,
Deeuce

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Holiday Invitation

by katiss
(USA)

A friend who lives in another country has invited to you come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:


Thank him/her for the invitation

Explain why you cannot come

Give him/her your other news



Dear Rosella,
how are you doing? When I got your letter last week I realized we haven‘t talked in month. Thank you so much for including the pictures of your new house and inviting us to visit you in Brazil this summer. I always wanted to go there, but I am afraid we will not be able to make it this summer. Maybe you can visit us instead in Australia? We have just moved to the coast 3 month ago and I have decided to quit my office job. Instead we are now running a small café in a historic beach house. It is quite exciting, but also a lot of work: I get up at 5 a.m. every morning and we usually close after 11 p.m. The house was quite run down when we bought it, but now it looks fantastic. Obviously, I can not close the café for several weeks during summer as we just opened a few weeks ago. We also adopted a puppy named „Spotty“ we can not take on the trip. I attached a few pictures to the letter and I hope they will convince you to come here this summer. Just let me know.
Yours Sincerely,
A. B.

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Corrected Version:


Dear Rosella,

How are you doing?

When I got your letter last week, I realized we haven‘t talked in months. Thank you so much for including the pictures of your new house and inviting us to visit you in Brazil this summer.

I’ve always wanted to go there, but I'm afraid we be able to make it this summer. Maybe you can visit us instead in Australia? We have just moved to the coast 3 months ago and I've decided to quit my office job. Instead we are now running a small café in a historic beach house.

It's quite exciting, but also a lot of work: I get up at 5 a.m. every morning and we usually close after 11 p.m. The house was quite run down when we bought it, but now it looks fantastic. Obviously, I can't close the café for several weeks during summer as we just opened a few weeks ago.

We also adopted a puppy named ”Spotty“ who we can't take on the trip. I’ve attached a few pictures to the letter and I hope they will convince you to come here this summer. Just let me know.

Hopefully see you soon,

Yours Sincerely,
Best wishes,
A. B.

FURTHER COMMENTS

It’s a good letter that fully answers all the points needed. Here are some other comments.

Paragraphs

I’m not sure if it is an IT error, but there were no paragraphs in the version I got. Make sure you break up your letter into paragraphs.

Complex Sentences

You should try and fit a few more of these in as the examiner will look out for them. For example, you could have done this:

Although I’ve always wanted to go there, I am afraid we will not be able to make it this summer.


Closing a Letter

You closed your letter incorrectly. 'Sincerely' is for formal letters.

Informal letters use 'best wishes' or 'best regards'.

See this lesson on how to open and close a letter.

Your letter also seemed to close a bit suddenly, which is why I added that last sentence.

Abbreviations

It's also ok to use short forms or abbreviations in informal letters which is why I changed them in yours. There was nothing wrong with the grammar.

Present Perfect

You wrote:

We have just moved to the coast 3 months ago


'ago' is used with the past simple, not present perfect so it does not look right. That's why I changed it to past simple.

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Nov 19, 2015
question
by: azar

dear freinds,

I have a question from you .any body know that we use complex sentence for informal letter or simple sentace.I do know and i was confused which one is correct?

Thanks in advance .

Azar Rezvani

Nov 19, 2015
question
by: IELTS buddy

Hi Azar,

In all your IELTS writing you need to use a mix of sentence structures, so you will be using simple, compound and complex.

You must have some complex sentences as you need to show that you are able to use these to start getting a 6 or above for your 'grammar range' criteria.

Feb 20, 2016
it was helpful
by: Anonymous

Wonderful

Thank you it was really helpful once again thank you.

Thank you thank thank thank thank you you you.

Sep 18, 2016
Mind blowing letter
by: Raunak

Next day is my exam and it is really very good letter so thank you very very much

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Returning a Forgotten Item

by appz

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home you realized you left your wallet there.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

1. Thank your friend for the holiday
2. Explain that you left your wallet in their house
3. Give them instructions of how to sent it back to you


Hi Latha

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it’s just been a week that we met, it feels like ages.

I totally enjoyed the week spent with you and your family in New York. It was the best holiday that I have ever had and must say your kids are adorable. The time spent with them in the city park was so much fun. I can’t thank you enough for such an organized and fun filled holiday.

Actually on returning home, I realized that I left my wallet in your house. I have been so careless recently and all my cards and work id is in that wallet

So could you please courier it to my work address at the earliest since I recently shifted my apartment and is not sure with postal code yet. My work address is mentioned in the business card I gave you.

Thank you so much again for such a memorable holiday and do visit us on your next vacation.

Take care
Aparna

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Selling A Television

by Anshu
(Bangalore)

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.

In your letter:

- Explain why you are selling the television.
- Describe the television.
- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.


Dear Suzana,

Hope you are doing well, I am doing fine too.

As you know i am moving abroad next month and there are lot of things at home which i do not want to take along with me. Television is one such item which i am planning to sale at cheaper & reasonable price.

It is 40 inch sony TV with LED screen bought in year 2016, have all the latest features such USB port & internet connectivity, you can watch movies , music and can do lot of things.

I’m leaving the country next month, which is only 4 weeks away, so let me know if you want to see it, it would be best to come on 20th or 21st. That will give me time to sell it elsewhere if you are not interested.

Ok, I look forward to seeing you. Let me know if you can’t make it.

All the best,
Anshu




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Organising a Birthday

by Jasleen Kaur
(Patiala, Punjab, India)

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Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

- say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event
- suggest a suitable venue
- make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. Dj, jazz band etc.

Dear Mary,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of the health.

I am writing this letter in reference to your letter which I got yesterday. I was very delighted after reading your letter that you are going to celebrate your birthday. We all are going to paint the town red on your birthday party night. To make this happen, I think you should celebrate in style by arranging a fancy dress theme party where everyone would not only be excited to see you but also to see their companion's dress as well.

Since, you are going to kick up your heels, so you should book a hall with adequate space. There is a restaurant with name Shaureya in your vicinity. It will be perfect for this occasion.

Moreover, if you could arrange for DJ as well, it would add even more fun to your party and we could dance even after small hours.

It will be great to catch up again soon. Give my best wishes to everyone in the family.

With Love
Jessica

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Oct 31, 2018
writing assesment
by: Anonymous

The letter was organized and written pretty well. at least 6.5

Oct 31, 2018
Band 7
by: Jessica

How to get 7? What were the mistakes?

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Friend in Hospital

by Inspired

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

- tell him which team won
- describe the conditions on the day
- say how you felt about the match


Dear Martin,

Hope you are recovering from the injures . We feel very bad for not being with you at hospital.

I have a good news for you, Our Team won the Cricket match, hurry.As a main batman of our team you are incomparable and reliable. Most of our members accept that you hardwark and passion is something that motivate every one in the team. Unfortunately we missed your presence on this match. Through this match our team got a chance to participate in upcoming finals and that what we dreamed for.

I know you will be excited to know about the match. Best thing about the match was the weather, It was perfectly fine for the match. From the Tossing opposite Team got their batting first. Our target score were 578 and by the end by losing 5 wickets we got 579.Even though the match was tough at starting it become smooth at the ending.

We are eager to see you again, awaiting for your Prayers are always with you. Get well soon, take care.

Yours Sincerely

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Selling a TV

by Bhawna Sharma
(New Delhi)

You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain:

1. Why you are selling the television
2. Describe the television
3. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it


Dear Baljeet,

I just want to let you know that I am selling my old television as I bought a new Samsung(52 inch, full HD) tv recently. As I remember the last time we met, you were looking for an old TV online.

My old television is just 3 years old and is in very good condition. Its a 32 inch Sony LCD screen with bluetooth and HDMI connectivity. It is under the company's warranty that covers 10 years after purchase. All the bills are warranty card are with us.

If you are still searching for one and my television fits your requirement, you can see it anytime by next weekend. The price can be discussed once you like it.

Waiting for your reply.

Bhawna Sharma

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Moving House

by Bhawna Sharma
(New Delhi)

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English speaking Friend. In your letter:

- Explain why you have moved
- Describe the new apartment
- Invite him to pay a visit.


Dear Baljeet,

With all my excitement, I would like to tell you that I have shifted to a new accommodation in Saket.

I moved here last weekend during auspicious time of Navratra. The reason for change was the long travelling hours from my last accommodation to my office.

As you already know that I recently changed my work location to Delhi and the long travelling hours would leave me tired for whole day. With this new change I am saving almost 2 hours daily.

My new paradise is a 2 bedroom apartment facing park. Its well-connected by metro and has a Select city walk mall just 2 km away. The place is well furnished and has really good ventilation , something I always look out for.

I would like you to plan a visit someday to my new place. We can also plan a pajama party to revisit our old good memories.

Hope to see you soon. Waiting eagerly for your visit.

Bhawna Sharma

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May 23, 2019
Feedback
by: Anonymous

This sample was helpful and insightful. Thanks for sharing

May 26, 2019
appreciation
by: Mac-Anthony

This sample is indeed a moral booster.

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