IELTS Task 1 Writing:
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Bar Chart Money Spend on Consumer Goods 
Hi again, Please also help me with my task 1 writing. Thank you very much. The chart gives the information about consumption of six goods in four …

IELTS Table - Land Covered by Forest 
Hello again, I also have Task 1 essay. Please review it for me, please. Thank you. The table illustrates the forest rates as percentages in …

IELTS Bar Chart - Car Trips 
The provided bar chart depicts the estimated percentage of car trips taken between male and female in 2005 from eight different purposes. Most noticeably …

IELTS Bar Chart - Leisure Activity Participation 
The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting …

IELTS Graph CO2 and Vehicles 
The figures compare a lot of CO2 that emitted annually by cars, buses, vans and trucks, and illustrate data on the number of vehicles in England and Wales …

Bar Chart Museum Visits 
As is shown by the graph how many guests to the three museums in the period from 2000 to 2005. First of all, let us take a look at the date provided …

IELTS Table - Computer and Internet Users  
I am pleased to connect with you, we'll help each other improve our Ielts skills. This is my recent task needed your comments. ***  The table …

IELTS Line Graph - Dubai Gold Sales 
The line graph gives information about gold trade in Dubai from January to December of the year 2002. It is clear in the graph that the gold sales reached …

IELTS Line Graph - Proportion of Population Over 65 
Hello everyone, please check out my essay. Friends check the coherence and cohesion, structure of the essay. Thanks a lot. *** The bar chart shows …

IELTS Bar Chart - Percentage of Urban Populations 
Hi, I have been studying for the IELTS for over a year now, and my reading and listening is acceptable (estimated to be 8.0+), but my writing has …

IELTS Table - Underground Railway System 
Hello, My name is Wahyu and I want to improve my English writing skills. Can anyone help me to correct, comment, or review my writing? This …

IELTS Bar Chart - Software Downloads 
Can you guys please help me to find something wrong with them? I have written this graph twice and also within 15 mins. Description One The …

IELTS Bar Chart - Annual GDP Growth 
The bar graph shows how levels of annual GDP growth for Tunisia, Ecuador and Japan have altered from 2007 to 2010. More specifically, in 2007, Tunisia’s …

IELTS Bar Chart - Number of Car Journeys to the City Centre 
The chart elucidates the number of journeys with car into the city center by residents and non-residents over ten years period. The x-axis shows the years …

IELTS Bar Chart - Science Qualifications 
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore. On the x-axis there are 4 types of qualifications in science, …

IELTS Line Graph - Fast Food Consumption 
The bar graph represents the weekly expenditure on three categories of fast food according to income groups in britain while the line graph illustrates …

IELTS Bar Chart - UK Telephone Calls 
The bar chart depicts the total no. Of million minutes utilized for different phone call types categorised as local, national & international and mobile …

IELTS Bar Chart - Changes in Average House Prices 
The bar chart below illustrated the changes of the price in overall accommodation prices in five different cities in two time periods: 1990 to 1995, 1996 …

IELTS Bar Chart - Honey-Bee Colonies and Production 
The charts gave information about the number of honey-bee colonies and the amount of honey production in the United States between 1970 and 2010. The …

IELTS Line Graph - Radio and Television Audiences 
This line graph shows the percentage of audiences in UK who entertain TV and radio through the day from October – December in 1992. Generally, the …

IELTS Table - Consumer Spending on Different Items 
Hi, I really need a band 7. Can you please tell me if its good enough for me to sit the exam. I will really appreciate your answer :) *** …

IELTS Table - Secondary School Attendance 
The table indicates the percentage of students who attended four different secondary schools in the years of 2000, 2005 and 2009. As seen in the table, …

IELTS Pie and Line Graph - Spending on Restaurant Meals 
hello guys, could you help me to grade my IELTS task 1 writing? I appreciate your help. The pie charts illustrated food budget ratio between dining …

IELTS Table - Pupils who entered higher education 
Hi! Could you help me to improve my writing skills? The table below shows the percentage of pupils who entered higher education from five secondary …

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IELTS Bar and Line Graph - Three companies selling farming equipment 
Hi! Could anyone grade my graph? The graph shows the value in thousands of dollars of three companies selling farming equipment every five years …

IELTS Map - Tourist Facilities 
can someone please check my task 1 and rate it. The two maps show the same island. The first one is before and the second one is after the construction …

IELTS Bar Chart - Modes of Transport 
The bar chart illustrates the different types of transports used to travel in a European City from 1960 to 2000. It is evident from the chart that, car …

Line Graph - Average weekly earnings of graduates and non-graduates  
please check bellow task The graphs provide the comparison of weekly income in average, for both genders, who have academic degree and non-academic …

Diagram Task 1 - Cement Making Process 
These diagrams illustrate the process of making cement first, followed by a visual explanation of concrete’s production. While cement is made through a …

IELTS Bar Chart - Computer Ownership 
Hi, may i please have a feedback on my ielts writing below? any suggestion is a huge help. thank you. Computer ownership increases significantly from …

IELTS Line Graph - Food Consumption in China 
can i get a band 8 for my graph? The line graph compares the amount of food eaten by Chinese consumers from 1985 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen …

IELTS Graphs - Global Population Trends 
Can anyone check my graph essay? The pie charts compare the change of global population between 1990 and 2000. It is clear that there was a significant …

Task 1: Cinema Viewing Figures For Films 
Can someone check this....Please give me my possible band score...tnx The table chart elucidates information on the cinema viewers for films by the …

IELTS Line Graph - Population in the US State of Oregon 
It'd be nice of you if you help me and correct my mistakes to avoid making any in my IELTS exam. thank you so much. The line graph compares the change …

IELTS Line Graph - Money Spent on Books 
The line graph elucidates information on the money spent on buying books in the four various countries-Germany, France, Italy and Austria-for 10 years …

IELTS Line Graph - The changing patterns of domestic access to technology 
The graph illustrates the changes in domestic access to modern technology in the UK from 1996 and 7 years later. It is apparent from the charts, domestic …

IELTS Task 1 - Use of Water among Gulf Countries 
The graph compares domestic, agriculture and industrial use of water among gulf countries, in the year of 2000. It can be seen that Oman and Saudi Arabic …

IELTS Line Graph - Employment Patterns in the USA 
Hello everyone! I have to say that: this has been the first time i try writing an IELTS writing task 1. I am sure that I have made a lot of mistake. …

IELTS Bar Chart - Oil Production Capacity 
The graph compares changes in the Oil Production Capacity in millions of barrels per day in six countries. Overall, it is clear that oil production …

IELTS Line Graph - Visits to New Music Websites 
The line graph delineates information in comparison to the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. On day 1, one can favourably notice that …

IELTS Bar and Pie Chart - Reasons for Study 
The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in study for career reasons with age. Nearly 80% of students under 26 years, study for their career. …

IELTS Line Graph - Unemployment in US and Japan 
The line graph compares figures for unemployment in America ad Japan over a period of six years. Overall, the unemplyment rate was higher in Japan,compared …

IELTS Line Graph Value of Exports 
The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarize …

Task 1 Bar Chart: Effectiveness at Work 
The graph illustrates the information about the factors that affect the work effective of workers in a company. Workers are divided into two groups depending …

Task 1 Table: IELTS Results 
The graph illustrates the ielts results of candidates from some language groups during 2003. As can be seen from the graph, all numbers ranged from 6 to …

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