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Dec 18, 2013
 It's very good approach for writing an essay.
by: Jaswinder

Thanks for posting such a nice essay.
Dec 21, 2013
 good
by: tariq

your work is good how much you got in your ielts test ?
Dec 22, 2013
 7
by: Anonymous

There are few if any mistakes, but the text is rather repetive focusing on few poinrts.
Some phrases sound redundant and copied, but overall u show a good command of English.
good luck
alaa
Dec 30, 2013
 good essay
by: Ann

Thats a well framed essay.. the only thing i felt is the need to state your opinion clearly in the introduction..
I dont know if am right... any suggestions will be heartly appriciated.
Nov 13, 2014
 Good essay
by: kairline

Superb! you have written a good essay. I guess this is worth of 7 band.
Jun 08, 2017
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by: Anonymous

Thank u for posting this essay
Feb 21, 2018
 super! essay
by: Anonymous

THANK YOU FOR THIS ESSAY. IT IS SO I LIKE IT. ALSO THE FIRST LINE, I GET MORE POINTS FROM THAT LINE ITSELF.

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