It's very good approach for writing an essay. by: Jaswinder
Thanks for posting such a nice essay.
Dec 21, 2013
good by: tariq
your work is good how much you got in your ielts test ?
Dec 22, 2013
7 by: Anonymous
There are few if any mistakes, but the text is rather repetive focusing on few poinrts. Some phrases sound redundant and copied, but overall u show a good command of English. good luck alaa
Dec 30, 2013
good essay by: Ann
Thats a well framed essay.. the only thing i felt is the need to state your opinion clearly in the introduction.. I dont know if am right... any suggestions will be heartly appriciated.
Nov 13, 2014
Good essay by: kairline
Superb! you have written a good essay. I guess this is worth of 7 band.
Jun 08, 2017
Essay by: Anonymous
Thank u for posting this essay
Feb 21, 2018
super! essay by: Anonymous
THANK YOU FOR THIS ESSAY. IT IS SO I LIKE IT. ALSO THE FIRST LINE, I GET MORE POINTS FROM THAT LINE ITSELF.
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