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IELTS Essay: Purpose of Shopping Malls 
In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree? The tendency of …

IELTS Essay: Professionals Moving Abroad to Work 
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others …

IELTS Essay: Socialising Online 
Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development? It is a fact that, …

IELTS Essay: Children's Free Time 
Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their …

IELTS Essay - School Sports in the Curriculum 
Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree? …

IELTS Essay: Decline in Police Numbers 
In some countries the number of police officers in active service is decreasing. Why is this happening and how could it affect society? The …

IELTS Essay: Taking a Gap Year 
In some countries young people are encouraged to work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss …

IELTS Essay: Motivation to Stay in the Workforce 
There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? …

IELTS Essay: Reading eBooks 
In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? …

IELTS Essay: Spending Money on Family Celebrations 
Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views …

IELTS Essay: Increase in Travel 
Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? In the …

IELTS Essay: Wildlife Peservation 
Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or …

Vegetarianism Essays 
Everybody should adopt a vegeterian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree? These days a number …

IELTS Gender Differences Essay 
Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because …

IELTS Essay - Reading Fact or Fiction Books 
People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some …

Benefits and Drawbacks of Studying Abroad Essay 
What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad for students themselves and the countries involved? Lately, with the help of globalization, …

School Curriculum Essays 
Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today's world subjects like Science and technology are …

Stress Management Essays 
Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can …

Over Population Essays 
Overpopulation of Urban Areas Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that …

Living a Healthy Life Essays 
In many countries people are having health problems because they choose to live a unhealthy life. What are the reasons for this? What can be done …

Improving Living Standards Essays 
Could you please comment on the essay below? Thanks in advance! Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but …

Level of Salary Essays 
Please Grade my essay. A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? We’ve always heard the expression …

Consumerism Essays 
Hi, Can you evaluate this essay for me, please? *** Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society, which …

Language Essays 
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Culture Essays 
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion? …

Media Essays 
Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you …

Social Interaction Essays 
Nowadays we communicate less with our family members. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is often argued that millennial generation is …

Animal Cruelty Essays 
Could u please tell me that how much would I get for this essay? A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that …

Airline Travel Essays 
I am going to post an essay I wrote after a along time, but it took me around 55 minutes. It would be a great help if all of you look into it and give …

Global Warming Essays 
Many scientists are concerned about global warming. Research shows that the worldwide increase in temperature is getting worse. Furthermore, global warming …

Space Exploration Essays 
Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion? In many countries, a big …

Achieving Happiness Essays 
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Other people think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite …

Child Development Essays 
Hi there, I was hoping to get a band 7 and above. Thank you all in advance for the kind help with this child development essay! Some people think …

Changes in Society Essays 
Hello, My name is Arvind Sharma. I am from India and preparing for IELTS without taking any coaching. Recently, I have come across to this web site …

Animal Experimentation Essays 
Testing on animals is common practice for products such as cosmetics or drugs. Some people regard testing on animals as completely wrong and inhumane …

Purpose of University Essays 
Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education …

Job Satisfaction Essays 
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute …

Co-education Essays 
Some people think that this is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending …

Moral Values Essays 
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas …

Zoo Essays 
Some people believe zoos, where wild animals are kept in a man-made environment, should no longer exist in the twenty century. Do you agree or disagree? …

Learning a Foreign Language Essays 
Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages …

Education System Essays 
Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this …

Preservation of Historic Buildings Essays 
Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important …

Employment and Older People Essays 
It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers …

Environmental Problems Essays 
Water Scarcity Water resources around the world are getting scarce. Discuss the causes and solutions. Fresh water has a fundamentally beneficial …

Nature Nurture Essays 
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes …

Immigration Essays 
More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing, and medicine. …

Working From Home Essays 
Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from …

Modern Technology Essays 
In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication …

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International Relations Essays 
The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead. To what extent …

Childcare Essays 
Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think …

Paying for University Essays 
Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state. To what extent do …

Mobile Phone Essays 
There are social, medical, and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree the problems of mobile …

Health Education Essays 
Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals …

Housing Essays 
Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? It …

Tourism Essays 
Nowadays, scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this …

Capital Punishment Essays 
By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. …

Prison Essays 
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of …

Internet Essays 
According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of …

Parenting Skills Essays 
Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculums. Others think that it is not essential for students. …

Music Essays 
Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses …

The advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city 
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city. Nowadays, large cities are becoming more and more inhabited. The majority of …

Food and Health Essays 
Eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life. To what extent do you agree? Nutritionists have advised of eating a balanced …

Nuclear Power Essays 
The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh …

Obesity Essays 
The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this due to problems such as the growing of number of fast food …

Arts Essays 
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To …

Child Labour Essays 
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree …

Success Essays 
Hello, friends please give some feedback for this success essay. Do I need some changes on this or not? Success means the desire was strong enough. …

Working Women Essays 
Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies …

Home Schooling Essays 
Could you grade my home schooling essay? Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think …

Cosmetic Surgery Essays 
Thank you for reading my cosmetic surgery essay. I hope to receive comments from all of you. If possible, please score my essay based on IELTS Writing …

Traffic and Transport Essays 
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other …

Museum Essays 
It is said by some people that museums an meant for entertainment. On the other hand, some people say that they are only meant for education. Discuss …

Caring for the Elderly Essays 
Hi, Can someone please check this Caring for the Elderly Essay. Thank you! In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with …

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Community Service Essays 
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving …

Work and Career Essays 
Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job, whereas others advocate changing jobs from time to time. Discuss both views and …

Crime Essays 
Many people are too scared to leave their home because of a fear of crime. Some people think that more should be done to prevent crime, whereas others …

Freedom of Speech Essays 
Can someone please review and give a possible band score for my freedom of speech essay. Thank you:) Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? …

Computer Essays 
Can you please give your feedback on this essay? Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree …

Globalisation Essays 
Can anyone review my writing? Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. …

University Essays 
Hi I am new here, I have been taking IELTS exam for about 6 times already and I havent got my desired bandscore of 7 in my writing test. I would like …

Sports Essays 
Hi Guys it is my first time to share my writing. Need to score a 7 so any help or comment to improve my writing will be really appreciated. Cheers ---------------------- …

Compulsory Military Service Essay 
Can anyone please tell me how much will I possibly score in writing with below essay? Many countries have compulsory military service for men after …

Advertising Essays 
Hello Friends, I am practicing for my General writing task 2 and below is one of the essay. Please help me with your feedback. Thanks Some people …

Television and Children Essays 
Can someone rate my task two television and children essay? Thanks. Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do …

Leisure Time Essays 
Hi everyone. I am a beginner in IELTS, and studying by myself because I have no condition to take a class. I will do IELTS in next 2 months, so I really …

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