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Immigration Essays

by Sevda


More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing, and medicine.

Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

What is your opinion?



Qualified people always seek to earn jobs in rich countries. Especially, these employees such as engineering and doctors move from their own countries to developed countries in order to attain jobs at high - standart companies. Some people claim that this type of movement between the rich and poor countries is natural process. Others feel that rich countries are stealing from poor countries by doing this. In my point of view, workers usually move to the rich countries due to main reasons.

First of all, rich countries offer huge salary. Because these countries have strong economic and financial status. That is why it is easy for them to hand workers this tremendous number of money per month. Today there are certain programs in some rich countries for those who has qualifications in specific areas. This kind of supporting leads to trade the benefits between rich country.

Secondly, it is unusual experience which the person have never had before. In spite of difficult studying chances there, people are able to practise their previous knowledge and earn plenty of skills with working at sophisticated companies. It also allow to increase their backgrounds at their majors.

Thirdly, it is not about a country, it is about a person. That is why rich countries offer individuals not country where they live in.

All of above prove that moving from poor to rich countries is natural process. It is not expressed with stealing people country to country. Instead of it, poor country should pay more attentions at the local problems in order to make these abmitious individuals staying in their original homes.

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Movement of People from Poor to Rich Countries

by Kamaljeet
(Ludhiana )

More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist area like engineering, computing and medicine.

Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.


These days due to unemployment well educated people are migrating to developed countries. which is not good for their native country.

Some people think that the people who are well qualified from poor countries are given opportunity by rich countries, they are moving to those countries.

Due to this practice developed countries are becoming more developed and poor are becoming more poor. people think that is done intentionally by the rich countries. moreover they think their qualified people like doctors, scientists, engineers and many more moving to another countries, as the growth of the country depends on these people.

On the other hand, some people think that it's naturally happens. developed countries give opportunities to all people. they are not force anyone to join their companies, it's depends on the people they want to go or not.

In my opinion it is true that these days people are moving to another countries. the main reason of this practice is that the government of the poor countries do not take any steps to give opportunities to them according to their qualification. second reason is that people get more facilities in other countries as campared to their own. For instance, I have seen many people who do their studies in India and do not get any opportunities there and they move abroad as they offers good salary package and more facilities. it is clear from the above example that government should pay attention on this.

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Jul 11, 2015
require more elaborations.
by: Anonymous

Essay is good but need to elaborate more, examples are lacking.

Jul 12, 2015
Reading is good habit
by: richa

For me, movement form poor to rich does not matter because poor make you what you are now today. There is a sign of hope when poor goes there and work hard to become rich therefore most of the people especially poor play a major role in rich countries.

Jul 24, 2015
pathatic
by: Anonymous

no coherence...no lexical resources....don't suite to ielts buddy

Mar 11, 2016
Academic Writing
by: Anonymous

Guys, I've got a question...

Is it possible that the topic will have the next view:
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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist area like engineering, computing and medicine.

Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

Use specific reasons and examples TO COMPARE THESE TWO APPROACHES?

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So to speak, is it real to write CONTRAST/COMPARISON essay with such a topic?

Mar 12, 2016
Comparing and Contrasting Essays
by: IELTS buddy

Hi,

You can't rule anything out because IELTS never state exactly any types of format of questions they will present.

However, I've never seen a question that asks you directly to 'compare' two things in the prompt.

But that said, you often do have to compare things but it may be more indirect. For example:

_____________________________________________

It is better to have a small family rather than a large family.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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You are not directly told to 'compare' big and small families but you may well end up doing this if you want to discuss the pros and cons of each.

So I would say it is unlikely to be asked directly but you still need to know how to compare things and the language for this if necessary.

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Impacts of Immigration

by Mona

More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. 


Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.


Qualified workers always seek to be hired at rich countries for better life. Specifically, these employees such as engineers and doctors move from their developing to developed countries in order to acquire jobs at the high-standard companies. While some encourage this type of movement between the rich and poor countries and see it as natural process, others have seen that developed countries attempt to steal these educated people. In my point of view, workers usually move to the rich countries due to main reasons.

First of all, rich countries offer huge salaries for outstanding workers. Because these countries have strong economic and financial status, the incomes each year would be at peak rate. Eventually, it is easy for them to hand hard workers this tremendous number of money per month. For instance, France is one of the richest countries in the world, so there have been immigration programs for people, who have qualifications in unique specializations. This kind of supporting leads to exchange the benefits between the rich country and certified individuals.

Secondly, it seems to me that unusual experiences could be added to the qualified movers’ careers in developed countries. In spite of difficult studying chances there, people are certainly able to practice their previous knowledge and earn plenty of rare skills throughout working at sophisticated companies. Because these widespread institutions have chosen fully professional, educational, and talented people from all over the world, this would allow immigrants to increase their capacities and backgrounds at their majors. Steven Jobs is an excellent example for this circumstance. Before he has died, electronic computer employees have dreamed to move to the United States for learning from his long creative experience in technology. Still, many have came to his team to join and discover more about this science.

To wrap up, moving from poor to rich countries is excited these days, and qualified people should have the freedom to move where they want and improve their life’s pattern. This movement could not be expressed with stealing people from country to country. Instead, developing governments have to compete the rich countries and pay more attentions at the local problems in order to make these ambitious individuals staying in their original homes.

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Living as a Non-native Speaker in Another Country

by Sierra

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?


Language forms an important part of our everyday life. It serves as the means of communicating our desires, moods and feelings; therefore living in a country where we have to speak a foreign language can often pose not only social but also pragmatic problems.

The primary reason that one might face social issues while residing in a nation where they have to speak a non-native language is that they can feel conscious or insecure about their language proficiency, leading to excess stress and anxiety; therefore some trouble in making friends can be experienced. Uncertainties about their communication skills might hold them back from expressing themselves honestly and making valuable connections. Additionally, when one learns a second language, it tends to lie more on the formal side of the spectrum whereas in everyday life people use informal language, in such a scenario, individuals might face some adversity in comprehending other people’s statements. Culture differences can also be linked to language barrier, as one might be unaware about the suitable public behaviour; they can unknowingly offend the people around them.

Language barrier can also hinder one’s professional life. For instance, while trying to communicate with authorities one might misunderstand what is expected out of them and act inappropriately or fail to positively communicate about the troubles they are facing, this affects their rapport in the cooperate world and can stagnate their work life. Moreover finding a job can be difficult, as during interviews they might come off as hesitant under confident and uncomfortable in their surroundings.

In my opinion, living in a country where one has to adapt a second language does pose innumerable threats and can prove quite troublesome, but if people try and educate themselves about the culture they are surrounded by then these issues are bound to be resolved. Furthermore, native speakers can also be kinder and more accepting towards the non-native speakers.

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IELTS Essay - Family Migration

by Abdur Rehman
(Peshawar, KPK,Pakistan )


These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them.

Do you think the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages in terms of family development?


In the running days, several people go to another country for work and also take their family with them. This essay will discuss whether the benefit outweighs the drawbacks.

On one hand, going to another country for work and taking the family with us have so many pros. Firstly, the live quality of life in the developed country where everyone has equal rights, all human beings are the same like company owner and labour eat the same food in one restaurant even same table also use for the same time. In addition, there's the offer quality of education like each institute have its own's laboratory and library which helps individuals to get concept base knowledge, and also no discrimination between affluent and impoverished students. Furthermore, it's the land of opportunities there is no corruption. In short, they live a quality of life as compared to their host developing country.

On the other hand, some drawback also happens for those who left their home country. First, members of their family think about relatives the of developing countries. In addition, they didn't do anything to their leave country in the race for development. It's also best to do something for their own country.

In conclusion, there are so many advantages and disadvantages but I give more preference to leaving a country if you want to live a quality life.

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Accepting Refugees Essay

by Adnan Jhan
(Islamabad, Pakistan)

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing.

To what extent do agree or disagree?


Develop nations should allow additional migrants and they are responsible for arranging the basic facilities like food and accommodation. I believe that, because it is a moral duty and the developing countries can easily manage their expenses.

The primary reason why wealthy nations should welcome displaced persons is that as human beings they can provide a helping hand to them. It is essential to help each other during trouble. Needy people should not be isolated from such terrible situations to face the uncertainty that might cause death. Moreover, most of the time in the world innocent people are suffering a lot due to the status of their living. They need fundamental amenities of their lives which unfortunately they would not get them. For example, countries like the USA and Canada to receive one million refugees of Myanmar and care about their basic needs.

Another reason is that high-income nations are stable economically and can help people who run away from war regions. Allowing more human beings and provide them food and shelter not affect their economy. Furthermore, it is beneficial for the country as it can provide more employment to the migrants who may strengthen the workforce. For instance, Canada needs more employers in various sectors such as in construction areas. Certainly, it would be a chance to get their labor requirement from the asylum seekers and place them into a particular field.

To conclude, rich countries should not refuse to provide primary aid to the refugees because it is a humanitarian responsibility and does not cause any damage to the economy of the nation

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IELTS Essay - Immigrating for Study or Work

by Ujjwal Singh
(faizabad uttarpradesh India)

These days, many people move to other countries for work or study.

Do the benefits of moving abroad for study or work outweigh the drawbacks?


Nowadays it is very common to move abroad for work and studies because they provide superior education and job opportunities. In addition to that some masses opine that it has both pros and cons on the growth of adolescent. This essay will delve deeper into the matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.

To begin with, indeed it is true that moving into another nation has many positive impact on child's development and it can be seen in many ways such as they get opportunity to learn various skills which are not available in there country as well as they get top class education. For instance there are many countries famous for providing quality education like UK, Canada, USA, Australia and many others. However, many scholars dream to study in these countries because they provide better and variety of job opportunities and assist to build a bright future. Moreover, children will get chance to learn and adapt over different culture and tradition and help in the growth of juvenile.

On the other hand, there are various loopholes of moving into another country such as adolescent were not aware about how to manage their lifestyle in other continents, for example firstly they face many circumstances to adapt the habitat of that country and manage there daily routine. Moreover, it also became indispensable to learn the language of country, otherwise they face many complications in communication with citizens and all these drawbacks creates a extra burden on child which leads a direct impact on the growth of child which is immoral to society.

In conclusion, I reckon the pros overcome the loopholes of shifting abroad in the search of better carrier options and studies because they want desirable outcomes regarding to their future and the only reason behind this is they get varieties in subjects and course.

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IELTS Essay - Moving Abroad

by Sukhman - gurwinders01@gmail.com
(Fatehabad, Haryana, India)

These days many people move to other countries for work or to stay.

Do the advantages of moving abroad outweigh the disadvantages?


Nowadays, people enjoy more liberty in choosing their work and residence. This essay believes that more advantages, like, improved interaction and more career opportunities, are associated with this phenomenon than disadvantages.

First of all, the primary merit of choosing one's workplace is that it provides a lot more opportunities of making progress in his respective job field. This is due to the fact that new possiblities are not confined by physical boundaries of distance. For instance, a number of individuals migrate from rural areas to mega cities in search of better jobs.

In addition to this, freedom to live and work anywhere has made large scale human interaction possible as it has become more convenient to contact people across the globe. For example, many companies are working with their employees from all over the world to develop their business.

On the contrary, drawbacks of this trend can also not be ignored, such as the development of developing regions like suburbs is hindered due to migration of workforce to developed areas.

To recapitulate, advantages of choice of moving to desrired places like, better opportunities and interaction are stronger than disadvantages like, lack of development in rural areas. Thus, it is desirable to have the option of working and living anywhere one wishes.

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IELTS Essay - Time Away from the Family

by June
(Germany)


People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families.

Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families?


Nowadays, numerous people all around the world are constantly separated from their families. I will discuss the reasons for this trend and its effects on these people and their loved ones in the following essay. The main reason why people move away from their families is that they cannot find a job in the vicinity of their home. Therefore, they either have to commute each day or they decide to move closer to their working place. Because travelling is often expensive and also needs a lot of time they decide to go with the second option. Many of these people would love to take their families, especially their families of procreation, with them. But often the best jobs are in the cities, where living is hardly affordable for a whole family due to high renting prices, expensive groceries, or school fees. This separation, particularly when it concerns parents and their smaller children, can cause some serious psychological and social problems. People who have to live apart from their family of procreation are not able to build shared family memories and will suffer from the constant feeling of missing out on their loved ones' lives. Additionally, they can feel lonely and are then in acute danger of falling into a depression. On the other hand, it is equally demanding for the left ones who have to manage their lives without the family member who had to move away. Especially raising children on their own can be extremely challenging for a single living parent. To conclude, the most important reason for people to leave their families is having better job opportunities in places where living for a whole family is barely affordable. Consequences of this model may be loneliness and depression as well as a challenging live style for those who are left behind.

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Dec 19, 2021
Time away from family essay
by: IELTS buddy

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Living and Working in a Foreign Country

by MK

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

Global is developing more and more in many fields. Therefore, people’s demand is found new opportunities. However, living and working in a foreign country have a lot of cons and pros.

First of all, living and working in a foreign country have a lot of the advantages. Of course, everyone always will choose a foreign country have good economy, medicine, insurance and security, which made anybody wants to live there. Additionally, oversea students would like to live and work at their study-abroad places after they experienced all of things in this country. Living in a foreign country also help people approach another cultures, they can open their mind with great knowledge. Beside that, working at foreign workplaces will improve people’ skills in career. For example, work culture of Asia has differed from ones of America, American do their job fast and clearly while Asian is contrary to American, they follow feeling a lot of.

Living and working in a foreign country also have disadvantages. Climate is a big problems when people change their living areas. Weather change lead to affect people’s health. If people can know many new cultures, which is the advantage, people sock off the strange style life, which is the disadvantages. Moreover, language is also difficult problem when people move their houses and live foreign countries. For example, there are many differ in opinions and ideas, but the obstacle of language make people can not explain own thinking exactly.

In summary, living and working in s foreign country or own country also have the advantages and the disadvantages. However, everybody can recognize and solve these problems, which is the most important.

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Please can someone correct my essay? I will be happy. thanks in advance.

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Dec 06, 2015
spelling mistakes...
by: Anonymous

u did some spelling mistakes.. when u read it again hope u will find..

Dec 06, 2015
bands
by: Anonymous

7 but correct spelling mistakes

Dec 08, 2015
Band 4-5
by: Anonymous

Yup have a lot of mistakes. Grammar and sentence structure is broken and impedes the meaning. Paragraphs are uses well, however there is lack of progression and discourse markers are used incorrectly or absent. Lastly, a lot of spelling mistakes.

A band 5 essay at best.

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