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Parenting Skills Essays

by abdur rahim kutubi

Learning to be a parent

Learning to be a parent

Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculums. Others think that it is not essential for students.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

There is no denying fact that elementary educational institutes should include the lesson of educating the children about becoming good parent who would manage the families in the future including rearing children. Although it is excellent idea of teaching the children into absolute citizen, some critics say that it is the waste of time in academic career. I agree with this above topic.

There are certainly some reasons why people would opine to teach the young generation with becoming flawless parent in a family. First of all, time management, bringing up the children to be effluent and family expenditure would involve the parents and their target is to flourish the name and fame of family. Perfect parent can handle to tackle the various types of problems during maintaining family, so, parenting can make young learners efficient to be glorious guardian who would expedite socio-economic development as well as well self-dependent in the pragmatic life. Secondly, family management is a significant part of a large organization that would be required to steer the country in innovative and creative ways. Young people who would be literates with this idea of making skilled parent would be able to perform potential family in future with efficient manner. Getting knowledge regarding becoming good spouse can be precious for young generation as well as development of country. Thirdly, how to judge, how to understand, how to address the ongoing wide range of difficulties in life and matters, learners would be able to learn from parenting lesson and good educated parent can produce best nation that hastens the overall development of a country.

There are, in turn, some causes behind emphasizing the academic curriculum. It is fact that plenty of subjects including parenting might make them panic and burden who are still young of tender age and would have to have enlightened academic results. Because of additional load their desires have been broken down and they are involved in different anti-social activities. Moreover, sometime, they might be mentally disrupted and are spoiled for overload instead of becoming bright nation.

To sum up, I think we should make our new generation enriched with proper education like lesson of becoming skilled and good parent in order to contribute a good nation who would be accurate the overall improvement of country.

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Aug 05, 2015
writing a good conclusion - Parenting Skills Essays
by: Anonymous

the conclusion is not very good. You have not suggested how to overcome the problems faced by the students if this course added in their study.

Aug 05, 2015
by: Anonymous

I have mentioned that students can learn how to manage their practical life from this lesson as their parents confronted. in case of conclusion, you can suggest me what to do in order to be appropriate.

Apr 25, 2019
Authentic in parenting skills essay
by: K azgari

Your essay on parenting skills is very useful to parents to overcome their struggles. It is crisp and authentic

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Including parenting lessons in the curriculum essay

by KIngsley Njoku

Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculums. Others think that it is not essential for students.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

There is no gainsaying the fact that becoming a good parent is a worthy adventure. Good parenting is a precursor for a more prosperous society and it catalyzes better children performance in all notable aspects of life.

Schools curriculum are designed to address issues of importance and there is empirical evidence that a good curriculum is a foundation for a just and egalitarian society.

Few, if any, adventure would be worth the stress of making inroad into school curriculum than lessons on becoming a good parent.
A school curriculum provides a basis for training. Most students have grown to become proficient in the subjects covered by the curriculum of teaching. If that is the case, lessons on becoming a good parent should be a key component of school curriculum.

The whole essence of students' education is to build a sense of civic responsibility. Stronger families is directly proportional to stronger societies. Thus, it is in the best interest of the society to include this subject in the curriculum.

Conversely, parental skill is a primitive reflex or character. This is evident if one observe the concept of Kangaroo Mother care-a concept widely used in the field of pediatric medicine.
KMC, as the care is fondly called, depicts the care Kangaroos employ to protect the offspring from harsh cold weather.

There is no documented evidence, theoretical or empirical, that there is a formal program of instruction for Kangaroos.

Man is a higher animal and thus is endowed with this basic instinct.

The society will live in is filled with so many pressing issues such as social inequalities, lack of universal access to healthcare, climate change, non-communicable diseases and the list is non-exhaustive.

Instead of flooding the curriculum with a rather basic human primitive instinct, these pressing issues should be prioritized in favor of it.

In areas where climate change is in the students curriculum, there is a positive correlation with better climate care and concern.

Research have demonstrated a fairly linear relationship between including this pressing issue and better societal outcome.

It is thus important, in my modest opinion, to jettison this "better parenting chit-chat' in the curriculum and focus on what is more important.

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Mar 05, 2015
by: Anonymous

U must reduce the number of paragraphs to 4 or max of 5.
Argument is not clear
But u can improve... Try to follow model essys ..
Best of luck...

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Parents as Teachers

by Fahad

Please Evaluate and point our errors and mistakes in my parenting skills essay about teaching children.

Parents are the best teachers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that parents are the best mentor in the world. They know about the characterstics of their children and can focused more on their weaker points. Some people argue that parent’s friendly attitude could play a vital role in the children learning. However, other state that they not equipped with modern way of teaching. I also believe that an atmosphere of competition and team work can only be provided by schools under the trained teachers.

Firstly, the concept of teaching dramatically changed over the period of time. Now children are taught to become smart learner than hard learner. For this teachers have been placed in the schools that are well trained. Furthermore, they are un-biased with all students. By this I mean that there is no favoritism in the class. This provides equal opportunity to learn and perform. This is hard to achieve at home, because parents can be biased.

Secondly, it is very important for children to learn how to perform in a team. This could be achieved only in class under their supervisor. Studying in their peer group will help to boost up their confidence. In addition to this, there is always an atmosphere of competition while learning in a group. This will enable them to work intelligently and with more paces.

However, parents friendly and relaxing attitude is a key to children learn by their heart, they can ask questions more freely and can have answers in a friendly conversation.

Finally, I believe that children learn both from their parents and teachers. But in modern world teachers are supposed to be the best option for them in learning.

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Putting Pressure on Children Essay

by Michael

I was wondering if anyone could give me an honest feedback on this task 2 essay I wrote. I am planning on taking the exam next month. Really would love your opinion. Thnx guys

Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.

What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

Answer: 50 min

Children today experience an ever increasing amount of pressure to succeed from their parents. It is only natural that a parent would want their child to succeed especially in today's rapidly evolving society. I believe that this phenomenon is a positive development because it promotes growth and encourages children to work hard for their future.

On the other hand, pressuring children early on will prepare them in facing the difficult challenges they might be facing in their respective careers. Learning how to work under pressure is paramount to success and is necessary for growth. When studying lobsters scientist found out that when they feel pressure their brain signals them that it is time for them to shed their shells and grow. Like lobsters, we humans also need to feel pressure in order for us to grow because when we are stagnant and complacent we learn nothing.

However, pressure is only effective when the child can learn how to cope with it. It is equally important for parents to create a healthy environment wherein their children can learn how to cope with stress. If a child is unable to cope with pressure it could be detrimental for his/her development. Studies have shown that alcoholism and drug abuse are results of ineffective coping. Children who are not taught how to cope with stress are prone to develop these problems in the future. Maintaining an open line of communication is key to knowing when a child is having difficulty dealing with stress.

In conclusion, with the competitive nature of today's society I believe that it is necessary to expose children to pressure, for it prepares them to face the challenges of the modern world with confidence. However, parents must also be considerate and should help their children cope with pressure by maintaining open communication.

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Older Children Living at Home Essay

by Bhawna Sharma

Please review the below essay and please share the band of my essay also so that I can improve my band.

Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The encouragement of living away from home or stay with family is debatable. Many parents believe that it is much more effective way to make their children responsible while others do not. This essay will discuss both side of argument in detail and provide evidence that why living alone is superior.

On the one hand, living away from loved ones make young generation more responsible in terms of time and money. This is because firstly, managing house hold chores such as cleaning, cooking and so on along with job, make someone more disciplined and matured towards life. Moreover, spending money while thinking twice to become financially stable till the end of the month teach them money management. Hence, by becoming independent and more responsible they could take care of themselves and their future family without any support.

One the other hand, children who live with family might be morally and mentally stronger than others however, love and money given by parents make them stubborn and irresponsible. Though, they could handle their bad times of life with confidence and full support of other members but sometimes they forget to respect the valuable things they got without any struggle in life. Therefore, parents should not provide everything desired by children without knowing the good or bad consequences of it.

In my opinion, youth without their family build confidence in their life which helps them to live in a better way in the competitive world. Hence, parents should support or give enough courage to their children who want to spend their life alone in any form such as boarding schools, college hostels, higher studies in abroad, overseas jobs and so on to become a better person.

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