Modern Technology Essays

by Raluca
(Calgary, Canada)


In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.

To what extent do you agree with this view?



Now, the worldwide population is about nine billions people, but from the ancient times society has worked hard to develop, to improve life standards, to discover and to control everything on the Earth and also what it is beyond its limits. The last two decades in which many advancements in the IT technology were registered is argued that might have brought a lot of good new opportunities or a series of serious consequences for the population.

A big percent of the global population enjoy using the actual technology in order to make their lives more easy, interesting, or even more affordable. To begin, the enormous network known as World Wide Web which help people to keep themselves informed about the things that are happening across the world, to link new virtual relationships, to download entertaining materials like music or movies, and to continue, the simple idea of communication through email that help normal individual but also big companies from any part of the globe to stay in touch with his or her friends and of course their business partners.

On the other hand IT technology has developed to a very high level, creating sometimes negative effects on population. If we take a closer look to the evolution of the interpersonal communication, we will unfortunately discover that the modern individual communicates at least eighty percent through the inter-medium of the virtual space and only twenty percent will meet other people. In addition, the labor market has been so utilized that it replaces a big part of the human work force need. Because of this fact the contemporary society face higher unemployment rates, and an unsecured future is created for the next generations.

In conclusion, IT technology is very useful for nowadays society, creating many new opportunities in different fields of activity, but when the limits are crossed and the population does not control anymore these gadgets there is a problem and can have serious consequences among the healthy development of the human beings.

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May 31, 2015
punctation
by: Luna

I was wondering about punctation. Very long sentences and no breaks?

Jun 09, 2015
My advice
by: Helen

I don't think this essay can be marked higher than 6.

There are grammar mistakes, coherence and cohesion are weak as well. I recommend the author to do IELTS preparation course.

I have been teaching English in Ukraine for 15 years, but my overall band was only 7,5. I want to be registered as a teacher in Australia, where I am living now, so I need better results.

IELTS exam is very tricky, and I advise everyone to take it more seriously. Don't believe those who say you can pass it with satisfactory results after a month preparation. There are some students in my group who are very smart, but have already taken this exam 13 times.

Sorry if I discouraged you in some way, I just want you to have a more realistic picture.

Good luck to you.
Best wishes,
Helen.

Jun 09, 2015
thanks
by: Anonymous

Thank you for your sincerity

Sep 22, 2015
answer
by: Raluca

No problem

Jun 24, 2016
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by: sahil khan

Hmm your essay is his I impress from this but I want to know about 10 GuD or bad effect On young generation

Dec 20, 2016
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by: Anonymous

Thank you for your sincerity.

Apr 17, 2017
thank
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It's good. Thank you.

May 12, 2017
Good Natural Expression
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This essay has good level of vocabulary and phrase usage - good natural expressions.

Aug 25, 2017
More Content - Modern Technology Essays
by: Anonymous

One can also add the role of technology in different fields like medical stream, agriculture, scientific and alike and adding some examples may add it more of content. Vocabulary is good.

Aug 18, 2018
structure
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'does not control anymore these gadgets'
That does not make sense.

Jun 27, 2020
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I've read the book and really enjoyed it.

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Access and Exchange of Information

by Le Thi Ngoc Han
(Vietnam)

Dear friends, would you please check my modern technology essay, of which topic is:

Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access and exchange of information. Far from being beneficial, this is a danger to our society.

What is your view?


Since the mid 1990s, the modern technology has had a revolutionary hit on culture and commerce, including electronic emails, blogs, shopping site, chatting video and social nerwork,etc. People all the world have witnessed such a rapid access and exchange of information. The further the technology reaches, the more doubtful people are about a danger to our society. This development has both pros and cons, which is still arguable.

I’m convinced that the convenience of modern technology is such a clear thing. Every class of people uses the Internet in his own way. Students use the Internet for researching and making friends, businessmen use it for doing business and relaxing, housewives use it for shopping online, travelers use it for booking rooms and taking map, others use it for updating new information and doing transaction online. It cannot be imagined how the world would be without Internet. Just with a mobile phone, a laptop or a desk computer connected with the Internet, we can access the world without stepping out of home.

Looking at the other side of the argument, modern technology is considered to become harmful to our society. As far as I know, the Internet brings a big amount of data at a very high speed, therefore, it is impossible to control the spread of information and the receiving entity. All kinds of information are updated all time no matter source of information and its truthfulness. Even an innocent child can access information easily, which can affect his behavior. What will happen if wrong data is organized for a wrong purpose, leading to an increase in in misunderstanding which may effect behavior, a decision or an outcome? Consequently, a big danger may happen to our society.

From personal experience, I‘m in favor of what benefits new technology brings to us. It is advisable to use modern technology smartly enough to exploit the Internet benefits . Also, we’d better not allow children to use the Internet without supervision of their parents. It’s a good idea to absorb what to be read and heard efficiently and quickly. Anyway, it’s important to learn how to balance our life, spend more time staying out and meeting people instead of staying online all the time.

In conclusion, everything is two-sided, not only new technology. Obviously, we cannot deny the benefits that new technology brings to the world. If someone asks me whether it becomes a danger or not, I think the outcome is upon the way it is used. Last but not late, if I were you, I would use new technology smartly enough.

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Aug 01, 2014
Dangers of modern technology essay
by: IELTS buudy

Hi,

Just some quick comments:

How long did it take? You should do it in 40 minutes but it seems quite long.

You need to focus on giving simple and clear ideas that answer the question. In your paragraph about the dangers - you don't really explain what any dangers actually are.

You explain how it can be dangerous because information can be exchanged quickly, but this is just repeating what the question says. You need to give some concrete examples of the dangers.

The one explanation you do give is not clear:

"...if wrong data is organized for a wrong purpose, leading to an increase in in misunderstanding which may effect behavior, a decision or an outcome?"

This just throws up more questions - what will be misunderstood? How will behaviour be affected? What decisions and outcomes?

Thanks

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Quality of Life

by leo
(sydney)


Technology has led to significant improvements in people’s life.

Do you agree or disagree?


Over the last two decades, people have witnessed some tremendous improvements in the area of information technology. While this change has led our work and life more convenient than before, I believe it also brings us several negative impacts.

It is true that recent technology developments have made our life become more convenient. This is because people can use their mobile phone to perform multi tasks, which cannot be imagined in the past. For example, having a smart phone these days allow users to check emails, pay bills and conduct a video conference through internet at anytime and anywhere. Therefore, it certainly makes individuals become more productive as they do not need to physically attend to complete these tasks.

Nevertheless, these technologies also create problems to people’s life. The major one is that it reduces the level of individual’s wellbeing. Thanks to the modern technology, adults are less active as jobs have shifted towards sedentary office work instead of manual labour. If they are getting used to this sedentary lifestyle, it is more likely for them to enjoy sedentary activities rather than outdoor activities. Consequently, they may suffer some chronic diseases at early age.

Anotrher dire effect of developments in technology is lack of family bonding. This is because people’s behavior has been changed by modern technology. For example, in recent years the younger generation tends to enjoy their time on their online life such as checking facebook rather than interact with their families at their free time. If they expose to this situation for long time, they may only live in their own virtual world. As a result, it will not only decrease their communication skills, but also limit their social opportunities with people from outside.

In conclusion, although technology has led to several improvements in many ways, I do believe that the problems brought by technology outweigh its benefits.

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Future Impacts

by Adham
(Pakistan)

In the last 20 years there have been significant advancement in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in future.

To what extent do you agree with this view?


A prominent advancement has been observed in domain of information technology (IT), like web network and emailing service, in last 2 decades. There exists both positive and negative outcomes of this change, but I do not believe that, in the long run, the negative side going to outweight the positive one.

As far as the disadvantages of IT are concerned, it imposes huge impact on the mentality of young generation. Firstly, the students are getting more and more reliable on internet for their home work which is suppressing their mental growth. For example, the assignments given at school are done by the students by searching on google or wikipedia as a mass compendium of information is available to them. Furthermore, pornography on websites are available to underage children because they can easily claim to be an adult on the internet.

However I believe IT has provided us much more benefits that will also be of service to mankind in future. Thanks to this development, the people around the world can keep updated by what is happening anywhere. From any research finding to fashion activities, all are instantly available on the internet. Moreover, e-mailing and voice communication has provided easiness in global business communication which would take much more time through post otherwise.

Like this era, I think the negative effect of IT could never out run the positives. While, on the other hand, it could possible that with further advancement of this technology we could get our hands on the negatives.

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Impact of technology on Communication

by dannguyet

Hi, I'm a newcomer. I'm going to sit for an IELTS test this September and my desired band score is 8 with at least 7 in Writing. I would like to share my 'impact of technology on communication essay' and I look forward to receive detailed feedback from all of you. Thank you.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

Has this become a positive or negative development?


With the advent of technological advances, people now have various ways to interact with each other. Subsequently, we gradually change the formation of relationships and develop more diverse types of interaction among people. However, there are pros and cons in this development.

Technology has made a huge impact on relationships. The invention of electronic equipment such as mobile phones makes it easier for people to contact each other. Therefore, we take less time to keep in touch with friends living far away. Furthermore, the emergence of social networks has made a revolution in communication. Nowadays, with a computer which has an Internet connection, people can chat with friends and family members. The advancement of technology has got the world together.

This development has both advantages and disadvantages. Positively, the interaction among people becomes more diverse and popular because there are more convenient, faster, and less time – consuming ways to communicate with each other. In addition, social networks help people expand the circle of friends from around the globe. People now are getting closer despite geographical distances.

On the other hand, there are some drawbacks in this development. Firstly, people are losing the art of conversation. Without letters and face – to – face talks, we are gradually forgetting how to make a proper conversation. Also, the appearance of teen code has made students forget how to make a grammatical sentence with correct spellings. Secondly, social networks have created a new type of relationship called “cyber relationships” in which strange people get to know each other through social network and become a couple. Not only these relationships are unstable but they have also led to many criminal problems like Internet fraud.

In conclusion, technology plays an important role in the change of relationships. We should utilize it to expand our circle of friends but we should also learn how to maintain and treasure our relationship in order not to let regrettable things occur.

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Essay on Machines Replacing People

by An-Thien Ho

Hi guys,

I'm taking the test in 11 days. After sharpening my writing skills, I need some feedback for my writing.

Thank you in advance.


With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.


It can be easily seen that technology has developed dramatically since the industrial revolution in 19th century. This is synonymous with the fact that manifold types of new machines are being involved into human lives for multifarious purposes. However, the trade-off between superiorities and drawbacks of advanced technology has sparked off a highly heated debate. The conundrum is worth deliberating about and, from an objective perspective, I strongly corroborate with the proliferation of new technologies in our lives.

First, there are several drawbacks of having too many machines in our lives. The conveniences that the machines have proffered are synonymous with the laziness and the lack of muscle movements. For example, in 2015, with the invention of hoverboards, a tremendous number of young people has refused to walk and accepted to stand on them to travel around. The impact of not practicing to their walking ability in the long term cannot be gainsaid. Furthermore, robots are taking over jobs in factories, leaving thousands of men unemployed. This fact is happening in numerous factories in developed countries, especially in automobile plants in Italy, Germany, Japan, the U.S and so on.

On the other side of the spectrum, there are multitudinous benefits that machines have brought to mankind. No one can refute the fact that since Industrial Revolution in 19th century, the production rate of mankind has skyrocket multiple times. For example, the production of cars worldwide has accelerated astronomically thanks to robotic arms in factory, or agricultural products has flourished remarkably with the usage of watering planes and crop harvesters. Also, we are living in a world of relentless changes, technology has shaped our abilities in every aspect in a better way. Information, instead of spending lots of time searching in libraries, now can be reached easily with a single mouse clicks. Travelling speed has been escalated, from 40-50 kilometers per hour into 600 km/h with modern trains in Japan. The more advanced the technology is, the more productive human can become.

To recapitulate, despite the disadvantages of the machines, the aforementioned superiorities of technology has outweighed its defects. In my opinion, it is beneficial for mankind to keep developing technologies and apply them to our lives.

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May 17, 2016
express not impress
by: Anonymous

Hi, some parts of the paragraphs are confusing such as in Par no.2. You have a lot of ideas mentioned but there's no coherence.

Par no.1 is impressive, the development of ideas is clear. However, please minimize jargonistic words or idioms.

Overall, it is a good essay! God bless in your endeavors!(:

May 17, 2016
REP: express not impress
by: An-Thien Ho

Thank you.

I have to confess that in the third paragraph, I was confused when I read this again. Thank you for pointing that out. I will rewrite another topic and look forward to your comments.

May 18, 2016
Overimpressive vocab
by: Bolanle

I think this is a good essay with few mistakes especially in the use of impressive vocabulary, however, if one can write like this, a good ielts score is probably obtainable.

My test date is also on the 28th this month, I wish us all test takers good luck!

May 18, 2016
Nice try
by: Anonymous

Another typical piece of essay from Asians, I guess you must be a band 1 student at your country. Lots of big words and examples.

As for the content:

1. the example of hover board is interesting, but it looks a bit illogical to say that the youngsters will lose their ability to walk since they are just toys.

2. the introduction is too long, try to cut the crap and get straight into the skeleton of your essay.

3. the conclusion looks memorised. for the sake of coherence, you should try to summarize both sides of your arguments with one or two concluding keywords.

As for your grammar:

1. many minor and subtle grammatical mistakes, especially with "articles", subject-verb agreement and plural nouns / verbs.

2. many redundant sentences. Try to convey only one message / idea in a sentence.

May 18, 2016
Read the question carefully
by: Anonymous

Overall it was a very good essay. Your vocabulary is impressive.

Though i guess you didn't analyze the question carefully. It wasn't asking for your opinion. With this kind of question, You just simply state the advantages and disadvantages with some supporting statements.

This way, you are really answering the question appropriately. But with your writing skills, you're sure to get a high score. Just read the question carefully.

I hope this helps. Good luck on your exam.

May 18, 2016
Thanks all
by: An-Thien Ho

Thank you for your comments.

First of all, I'm a band 2 student (physics) :D.
Secondly, well, I appreciate all your help. I'm about to write another essay with the above tips.

Thanks. I will try to write more carefully. :D

Sep 11, 2017
Tnx helen
by: PRAKASH

It's very useful to my homework thx a lot helen. I want to many more essays to improve my general knowledge. I wish you helen.
Dear PRAKASH IN SRILANKA

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Loss of Control

by Kelly
(Vietnam)

This is my first task 2 essay in my IELTS preparation course. Please go through it and tell me what should I improve if I want to score 7+ in writing

Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


Recent technological development has occurred at such an incredible rate that it has become a source of controversy. Some people are concerned about the negative impacts that technology has on their lives while others appreciate the comfort they obtain from it. In my opinion, the benefits of these developments could outweigh the drawbacks.

Why do people take the utilization of technology into consideration? Firstly, it is evident that the more advanced machines we produce, the less active we are. Automatic machinery was originally invented to better human’s life but people turn out to overuse it for simple tasks like turning on the lights or washing clothes. Such inactiveness potentially causes serious diseases, particularly obesity. Secondly, as such machines have gained total beliefs from human, some people are not able to tackle the problem themselves. Consequently, they tend to be less confident with their decisions and make more mistakes.

However, the positive effects of technology are also noteworthy. First of all, it significantly improves our living standard by providing us more efficient ways to do things. Excel, a vital tool in office, embody this idea perfectly. The second contribution of technology is opening new avenues for further enhancements in many areas. For instance, researchers are looking for a new type of transportation that can adapt to any conditions; scientists are also working on machines that can modernize current treatments for several diseases. Therefore, the world is expecting to welcome new generation of high-tech machines.

To conclude, I totally approve the idea that technology has made our world a better place despite some drawbacks created by human’s overusing. Technological developments may act as a precursor to our future breakthroughs in many domains as long as humans know how to use it efficiently.

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Living in a Technologically Advanced Society

by Irem CazadorDeCuervo
(Turkey)

Living in a technologically advanced society has negative effects on humanity

Do you agree or disagree?


It goes without saying that more and more people have started the argue whether living in a technologically advanced society has negative effects on humanity in the recent years. In today’s contemporary and modern world technology plays a critical role in people’s daily lives. I absolutely believe that living in a technologically advanced society has negative effects on humanity for the following reasons.

The first main reason why living in a technologically advanced society has negative effects on humanity is communication. For example, people used to miss each other more than now because they have any technological equipment like camera, cell phone or computer. Living in a technologically advanced society is able to help us for easier communication with each other wherever you are. I believe that people who live in before the technological developments, took care of more than now.

The second and most important reason why living in a technologically advanced society has negative effect on humanity is artificial intelligent. For instance, engineers are working on many kinds of robots which have artificial intelligence. We can send our cargos by drones instead of the postman or we can use these robots in our house to doing to clean. What is more, artificial intelligence robots will be preferred by businessman instead of people.

In conclusion, in the light of this information living in a technologically advanced society has negative effects on humanity. We have to be careful while develop the technology because technology and science have a huge mission and they can affect our lives directly.

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Old People and Modern Technology Essay

by Aryaa Gunavante

Old People Modern Technology

Old People Modern Technology

Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers.

What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?


Often, we find elderly people get frustrated with their lack of technological fluency - this stems from a multitude of reasons. This essay will focus on two main causes of this problem including the rapid development of technology and the limited access to modern technologies that elderly people might face. In addition, this essay will also provide a few examples of simple solutions that may solve these problems if implemented: these include programmes that can be hosted by school students or government subsidies.

With rapid technological developments that are ever-present in virtually every society, people are in a constant attempt to keep updated with the current trends and technologies. Unfortunately, a generation has been left out of the digital revolution. This can be attributed to the difficulties they face when accessing modern technology. This does not, however, solely stem from their inability to discern between different features on modern technologies; rather, a lack of accessible information for the elderly regarding technology is the main cause of this issue. Since their access to tools that can guide them through technological processes is inhibited (they may require prior knowledge such as using softwares, for example, Google), elderly people may get discouraged and choose to renounce technology. However, this can be solved with a few simple solutions that directly target these problematic causes.

Introducing a variety of programmes and volunteering schemes may tackle these issues. Through free online or in-person programmes, elderly people can be guided through the complexities of technology and can access assistance along their journey to better understand technology. For instance, high-school students can reach out to old-age homes to provide free seminars that focus on a single topic - for example, how to use Facebook to connect with friends and families across the globe. These not only help with assisting elderly people with technology, but they also bolster relationships between two generations. Alternatively, government subsidies can be implemented to help provide modern technology to those that are low on savings and lack financial stability. This will encourage more old people to pick up their smartphones and experiment! Through proper guidance and assistance, anyone can develop crucial skills in foreign areas, even if it is as intimidating as modern technology.

To conclude, constant advancements in technology can leave old people behind on all the exciting new features and benefits it has to offer. This essay briefly elaborated on how limited accessibility to technology and a lack of guidance and information on the basics are responsible for this issue. Furthermore, this essay suggested possible solutions that can be implemented by various groups of society - students, governments, or educational institutes - that will minimise the impact of this issue.

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Aug 08, 2020
Apriciation
by: Fatima

I usually keep on visiting this site for my preparation in IELTS. Beside everything whatever you are teaching, i would surely like to give applause for the essay written on older people and tech gaps. its really good to bring them in stream. Sentence structure is very attractive and gives feeling while reading. Keep it up.

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Work and Study from Home Essay

by leila

Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?


The world is getting change. It is irrefutable that technology makes a huge contribution to happen this. Working remotely or the environment of education are only a few examples of these changes. However, we try to get used to these changes these days. In my opinion, there are several drawbacks and benefits, also.

First of all, in terms of education has some drawbacks. The last generation is observed as computer-tending individuals. They like a waste of their time surfing on social media, chatting, or playing a game, so computer-based education ease up distracts them. Education means not only learning some subjects but also improving your social life skills such as communication skills, team works, or do's&don't's rule. Physically education is more effective to obtain these skills. In addition to this, there is nothing to replace with a teacher for a successful education life. Teacher and class-based education should be the main task and it can be combined with online sessions additional courses or exercises.


However, working from home have some benefits for employee and employer. It saves money and time, so it can be suggested for possible work-field. For example, some people commute from far away places, which means that employees have to spend extra time to arrive at their job and extra money for travel. Besides this, people consume water, electricity by working offices, this makes benefits for the employer. Furthermore, employers can hire more qualified employees around the world thanks to working at home. ın terms of the worker, they catch a chance to living wherever they want, maybe it decreases in some places' density because of the job opportunity.

In conclusion, worldwide computer spreading has some advantages and disadvantages. From the point of view of adults, it is beneficial for saving money and time. While, for the youth, it would be better traditional education mixed with new technologic facilities.

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