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Space Exploration Essays

by Arvind Sharma
(India)

Space Exploration Essays

Space Exploration Essays

Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things.

What is your opinion?


In many countries, a big proportion of expenditure is being spent on exploring the space. It is argued that this expenditure should be spent on other important things rather than on space exploration. However, in my opinion, keep other significant things in mind, space program is very crucial and important for the whole world and should be funded due to the fact that it will help to improve the communication between countries in the world and also helping to search a new alternate to live.

To begin, a reason to support funding space program is communication between all over the globe. Because business and organizations are being expanded geographically, they need a communication channel to run these businesses in an effective manner. It has become possible after launching satellites in the orbit. For instance, NASA, which is a reputed space organization has launched many satellites in the orbit, which are being used to broadcast the signals in the form of audio and video to across the globe. Moreover, the satellite television has only become possible due the space programs, and people are able to watch the global events instantly from anywhere. Thus, it can be said that by doing the space exploration, world communication has utterly been changed and for this reason it should be financially aided.

Furthermore, As global warming has become a serious concern for the whole world, scientist have started to find the alternate planet to live. Due to this fact, there are going to be conducted more space programs and eventually more money is needed to support these programs. For instance, ISRO, which is an Indian space research organization has been funded by the Indian government. As a result, they have managed to launch own satellite without help of other countries. In addition, there is a need to resolve the problem of global warming and this could only be possible if more space programs will be aided financially. Thus, it has been important for every country to give financial support to these programs so that the next generation can live in a better place.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that space program should be supported financially as there is need to get together the whole world to improve the communication and fight against the environmental problems.

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Comments for Space Exploration Essays

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Oct 24, 2016
Goood But
by: Nigga

Your Conclusion can improve

Jan 30, 2017
Space Exploration Essay
by: Anonymous

ITS OKAY BUT CONCLUSION NEEDS MORE WORK.

Apr 23, 2017
good
by: arnav

conclusion should be elaborated

Oct 01, 2017
nice Space Exploration Essay
by: Naina

From this essay we can help our child learn about space but the conclusion should improve.

Dec 05, 2017
Wow
by: Anonymous

your essay is so good it was so comprehensive and informative

Jan 04, 2018
Good but
by: Someone

Conclusion needs more work

Jan 26, 2018
Chalna title
by: Chalna eater

Very nice essay, I used it to get an E on my english assignment. Do you know where my dad dissapeared I mean he went to the pool yesturday but never came back, he is black btw might be the reason.


Thanks!

Jan 26, 2018
Reflection
by: Abraham Steinwitzhorogoldberg

The text was decent, some grammar mistakes. However the conclusion was terrible, inadequate to say the least. The overall text wasn’t too bad but the conclusion really lowered it from University level to Kindergarten. However I am jewish and my critique may be harsh due to my verbal intelligence.

Thanks!

Jan 26, 2018
Chöna
by: Jaman

Several occurences of grammatical errors. Bad text overall

Jan 26, 2018
(I'm asian) - Space Exploration Essay
by: Ostbåge

Curiosity has played an integral role in the advancement of the human species. From the discovery of fire by ancient ancestors to modern space explorations, it has been curiosity and the pursuit for a better future that has made humanity explore and innovate. However, exploration and innovation has never come without sacrifice. In regards to modern space exploration, the efforts to explore the universe has had negative effects including the loss of 18 human lives as of 2005 (CBS News, 2005), a tremendous investment of money, as well as adverse environmental effects both within Planet Earth and the solar system. These sacrifices have been made in efforts of propelling humanity into its most technologically and scientifically advanced stages. Therefore, due to the overwhelming social, economic, and scientific technological advancements that have been made because of investment in space exploration, the stakes and sacrifices made do not outweigh the benefits contributed.

Before one can criticise the efforts invested in space exploration, particularly monetary efforts, one must understand the underlying beneficial societal impact that is associated with investing time and money in space exploration. One is not only investing in merely ‘visits to outer space’ when funding and supporting space exploration (The US Space Program Benefits, n.d.). The money spent is invested in various industries such as manufacturing, research and development, salaries and benefits, doctors, teachers, scientists, students and various businesses.

Mar 16, 2018
Space Exploration Essay - Thank u
by: Anonymous

Nice essay... Thank you for the help...

Mar 31, 2018
A nice Space Exploration Essay. Some points for consideration
by: ammeliette

Hey, the essay is fine, I brought some points for consideration: Please also revise your conclusion, it is only one sentence, and rather weak.

In many countries, a big proportion of expenditure is being spent (expenditure spent -the words are almost the same, better "a big proportion of expenditure is allocated/distributed to space exploration).

on exploring the space. It is argued that this expenditure should be spent on other important things rather than on space exploration. (It is argued that funds should be spent on other ....)

However, in my opinion, bearing other significant factors in mind, space program is very crucial for the whole world and should be funded due to the fact that it will help to improve the communication between countries in the world and also help in a search for an alternative life.

To begin with, one reason to fund space programs is to facilitate communication across the globe.
Because businesses and organizations expand geographically, they need a proper communication channel to function/run in an effective manner.

This has become possible after satellites have been launced into the orbit.

For instance, NASA, which is a reputed space organization has launched many satellites in the orbit, which are being used to broadcast the signals in the form of audio and video across the globe.

Moreover, the satellite television has only become possible due to space programs, and people are able to watch global events instantly from any part of the globe. Thus, it can be said that by doing the space exploration, world communication has been profoundly changed and for this reason it should be financially aided.

Furthermore, As global warming has become a serious concern for the whole world, scientists have
started a search for the alternative planets to live in. Due to this fact, more space programs are planned to be implemented, and eventually more money will be needed to support these programs.

For instance, ISRO, which is an Indian space research organization has been funded by the Indian government. As a result, they have managed to launch an own satellite with no help from other countries. In addition, there is a need to resolve the problem of global warming and this could only be possible if more space programs receive proper funding. Hence, it is important to give financial support to these programs so that the next generation can live in a better place.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that space program should be supported financially as there is need to share the efforts of the whole world to improve communication and find solutions to environmental problems.

May 11, 2018
Good buddy - Space Exploration Essay
by: Chirag

Conclusion needs a lot of improvement

May 11, 2018
Passage
by: Bhagwant Singh

Thanks, your passage is very good. But you can add something more

Jun 05, 2018
hhw
by: hi

It is completely better than mine i will say

Oct 21, 2018
nice
by: anas

ok nice but conclusion is nicest

Jul 21, 2019
GREAT
by: Anonymous

GREAT

Nov 22, 2019
Good....improve conclusion..rest is nice..when I read it I got alot to know
by: Anonymous

I like this site...very good

Jan 30, 2020
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by: hades

not bad.........

Mar 01, 2020
space exploration
by: Muammad

I think your essay is very comprehensive but you totally ignored the dark side and show only positive side...so you have to work on it.

May 14, 2020
fk
by: Anonymous

Useless and Boring

Aug 25, 2020
Space Exploration
by: Anonymous

Many countries are investing large amount of money on space exploration. In my opinion, we should invest money after emphasizing our priorities.It is necessary to define our priorities in accordance with the situations faced by the people living on Earth. Firstly,space exploration is necessary and interesting. Secondly,it is necessary but not essential as compared to other basic needs.

Space exploration is fruitful,but it requires tremendous amount of investment of time and money.For research purpose,astronauts like Kalpana Chawla and many more scientists dedicated lives too.Due to space exploration,many things were invented. For instance, gravitational boundary of Earth. Satellites rotate around earth because of balance of this gravitational boundary.These satellites now have numerous applications.Countries even competed among themselves to launch their first satellite on Mars and Moon and invested lot of money for research purpose.

During this pandemic period,money should be invested on providing essential medical facilities.In India,many people are below poverty line.They cannot afford basic medical facilities and many labourers have lost their jobs.In quarantine period the amount of thefts,people dying because of empty stomach and committing suicide has increased.In Australlia,government credited 750 dollars in their people's account so that they can survive during lockdown.This strategy can be implemented so that basic needs are fulfilled.

Thus,it would be the best decision to invest in space exploration after the fulfillment of essential needs.In my opinion,money investment in space exploration should be invested wisely after over viewing it's benefits,requirements and most importantly consequences.

Mar 09, 2021
Do better
by: Anonymous

Leaving grammatic errors aside, the content itself needs a lot of work. You dealt with only one perspective and not only that only one niche of that perspective instead of including the whole topic. That's not a good way to go. Besides that like others mentioned, conclusion needs to be more conclusive. Don't get stuck up with one point, elaborate more about various points and if the word limit is a problem then leave acceptable open ends.

Nov 25, 2021
Amazing!
by: Vijay

Amazing, but only the conclusion is somewhat not appropriate. Otherwise from that, it is amazing!

May 22, 2022
Sui NEW
by: Nigga

Oki

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Spending Money on Space Exploration

by sayali vilas jadhav
(pune)

Money spent on space exploration is a waste and can be put to better use on earth.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Nowadays, most of the countries in the world are giving more importance to space exploration because it is a thing of pride for a country to achieve success in space exploration.

According to me, money spends on space exploration is worth as this gives us a chance for us to know new things around us. space exploration gives us a chance to innovate new things for the welfare of people.As we know, we found out that there is water on the moon. Due to this scientists planning for sending people to the moon to minimize population and to provide quality life to people.

But sometimes I feel that the money which we are spending on space exploration can be minimized and put into the welfare of poor people. due to this roadside children may also get an education and poor people may get jobs.

The bottom line is there should be a balance between both things as both things are good for the welfare of people. space exploration is also important like minimizing the poverty from the country.

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Contacting Aliens Essay

by LennyBoyyy

Some Scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


The opinions of scientists go apart when it comes to the topic of other life forms. Some say there exist other life forms and that they should be contacted, while others would not do that because it could be dangerous. There are without a doubt pros and cons regarding this topic, but in my opinion it would not be a good idea to contact them, because I would find it better to gain some knowledge about the other life forms before you contact them.

On the first hand would It be an unbelievable success to get to know other life forms. Scientists are searching for other life forms probably since decades, but never got any signs. Millions of Dollars were spent to reach these goal. It would change drastically people’s lives. In addition, the technology could in cooperation with the other life forms, advance massively.

On the other hand, could the contact with other life forms become very dangerous, because of the lack of knowledge the humanity has regarding other life forms. Not knowing how your communicating partner looks like, functions or thinks could be very risky. Additionally, it could be also the case that there don’t exist other life forms and that huge amounts of money were spend without any sense.

Summarized, I would not try to contact other life forms, because the cons in form of the uncertainty if other life forms exist and the danger in which humanity could be exposed exceeds in my opinion the pros in form of the probability that other life could be found and that a stable communication could be build.

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