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Aug 15, 2015
 Intro
by: Anonymous

I think your position is not clear in the introduction whether you clearly agree that the education institutions dissuade the students or not??

In the 1st paragraph
Not only ....but also
Aug 20, 2015
 Deviation from the topic
by: Anonymous

The topic is, measures to be taken by educational institutions to discourage students taking the subjects in which they are unlikely to succeed. Although the usage of vocabulary and grammar is good, the response is completely deviated from the topic.

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