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IELTS Bar Chart - USA Fast Food Consumption

by Elshan
(Baku, Azerbaijan)

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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The following bar chart illustrates how often people went to fast food restaurants in the USA in the 3 years (2003, 2006 and 2013).

Overall, even though the proportion of people having their meals at fast food restaurants only once per week was the most significant between 2003 and 2006, it was replaced by a group representing people who ate there either one or two times a month in 2013. Furthermore, the lowest percentage was reached by people eating there on a daily basis.

First of all, in the start of the period, people having fast food once a week stood at just over 30% and rose to around 33% in 2006, after which it experienced a drop to approximately 5% in 2013. In contrast, the group comprised of people who went to restaurants once or twice a month witnessed a decline of 10% between 2003 and 2006. Following this, it surpassed people eating fast food every week by rising to roughly speaking 33% in the final year of the period.

Regarding the lowest percentages, people consuming fast food at restaurants every day remained below 5% throughout the period given. Similarly, the second least serious percentages were reached by people who have newer been to fast food restaurants over a 10 year period. Initially, it settled at 10% in 2003 and dwindled slightly over the following years.

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Mar 31, 2021
 Pls find my answer
by: Anonymous

Statistical information on how often Americans ate at the fast-food restaurants over the year 2003, 2006 and 2013 is depicted in the given bar graph.

Overall, almost half the Americans eat fast foods at restaurants either a few times or once a week between 2003 and 2013. It is worth noticing that more Americans choose not to eat just as frequently as they used to do in the past.

Around 5% of people ate fast food every day in 2003. However, it dropped in the later years, fluctuations are there in the category of people who ate several times a week. It is noticeable that there was a decline in the people who ate once a week in 2006(around 33%) to 27% (approx.) in 2013, while during the same time period there was a surge in the category of people who ate once or twice a month. However, the proportion was fairly constant in 2003 for these categories.

Looking at the lower percentage groups, people who eat rarely in a year was around 13% in 2003, which increased to 15% in 2006 and was the remained same in 2013. People who have never been to fast food restaurants fall below 5% in the overall given time period.
Oct 24, 2021
 can this writing be marked band 7?
by: Anonymous

The bar chart illustrates how often the Americans consume fast food in restaurants in the three years (2003, 2006, 2013).

Overall, the highest frequency of people eating in fast food restaurants for 2003 and 2006 was once a week as opposed to one or two times a month which was the highest in 2013, whereas the proportions of people consumed on daily basis or never in restaurants serving fast food accounted for insignificant minorities in a given period.

The percentage of people who ate out in a restaurant weekly showed just above 30% in the first year, which climbed to approximately a third in 2006 and then dropped significantly to about 28% in the final year. Furthermore, there was a growth in the percentage of people eating out several times a week from about 17% in 2003 to one fifth in 2006, which resulted in a decline of nearly 4% in 2013. In contrast, once or twice a month category started at 30%, falling to one fourth in 2006 which rose dramatically to about 33% in 2013.

Regarding the lowest percentages, all the remaining three categories left unchanged in the years 2006 and 2013 (about 3% for every day, 15% for a few times a year and around 4% for never) although every day and never groups were just under 5% and a few times a year group was about 13% in the first year.
Oct 26, 2021
 can this writing be marked band 7?
by: IELTS buddy

No because you don't have a general overview which picks out the key trends of the graph. This will limit your TA score to around band 5. Check out the Task 1 Lessons on this site to make sure you know what you need to do.
Sep 03, 2022
 Correction
by: Anonymous

Although you have used a good range of vocabulary, there was a mistake in your writing. In ielts writings when we don't have any shares between the percentage we can't compare them and we have to talk about each a little, so it would be great if you were more careful about the tiny tips.

Good luck^^
Oct 13, 2022
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by: Asadbek

İn this chart sample there is a wrong at the end of the 2nd paragraph
Feb 14, 2023
 can any one rate my task 1 essay please. Thanks in advance
by: Anonymous

The following bar chart illustrates the information about the ratio of the people who went to eat at fast food centers in the america, in the given years 2003, 2006, 2013.

Overall, although a very few people preferred to eat every day at the fast food eateries, the percentage of eating once a week at the fast food restaurants was high.

In 2006, people who ate outside once a week was more than 30%, which was almost same as the percentage in the year 2003. However, the ratio was decreased to less than 30% in the year 2013,
in contrast, more than 30% individuals preferred once or twice a month to eat in the fast food restaurants in the same year 2013.30% of people ate once or twice a month in 2003, but this increased to 5% by 2006.

However, more than 15% ratio preferred to eat several times a week, very negligible percentage preferred to either every day or never.

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Fast Food Eating in USA

by valentina


The bar diagram illustrates how often USA citizens consumed fast food in restaurants in 2003, 2006 and 2016. Overall, the majority of the population in all the time periods considered ate in a fast food restaurant once a week or once or twice a month.

From 2003 to 2016 it is possible to observe a slight decrease in the frequency of eating in fast food restaurants. In fact, in 2003 more than the 30% of the people consumed fast food at the restaurant once a week, while in 2013 the percentage was around 27%. Moreover, less people went to fast food place several time a week (15%) in 2013 compared with 2006 (20%) and 2003 (around 17%).

However, in 2006 it is possible to observe a significant higher frequency of eating fast food several times a week or once a week (which reached respectively 20% and more or less 32%) with respect to both 2003 and 2013. Furthermore, the percentage of people who went to fast food restaurants every day or never remained stable in the considered period.

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Dec 11, 2019
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Feb 07, 2021
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