IELTS Bar Chart - USA Fast Food Consumption

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The following bar chart illustrates how often people went to fast food restaurants in the USA in the 3 years (2003, 2006 and 2013).

Overall, even though the proportion of people having their meals at fast food restaurants only once per week was the most significant between 2003 and 2006, it was replaced by a group representing people who ate there either one or two times a month in 2013. Furthermore, the lowest percentage was reached by people eating there on a daily basis.

First of all, in the start of the period, people having fast food once a week stood at just over 30% and rose to around 33% in 2006, after which it experienced a drop to approximately 5% in 2013. In contrast, the group comprised of people who went to restaurants once or twice a month witnessed a decline of 10% between 2003 and 2006. Following this, it surpassed people eating fast food every week by rising to roughly speaking 33% in the final year of the period.

Regarding the lowest percentages, people consuming fast food at restaurants every day remained below 5% throughout the period given. Similarly, the second least serious percentages were reached by people who have newer been to fast food restaurants over a 10 year period. Initially, it settled at 10% in 2003 and dwindled slightly over the following years.