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Apr 19, 2015
easy essay
by: Mudhir

really it is good paragraphs and easy to understand

Apr 21, 2015
good essay - Reducing the Working Week Essay
by: Anonymous

Your essay is grammatically very good. But there is no linking sentences between the paragraphs. Also you had concluded the essay in the second paragraph which should not be done.

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