really it is good paragraphs and easy to understand
Apr 21, 2015
good essay - Reducing the Working Week Essay by: Anonymous
Your essay is grammatically very good. But there is no linking sentences between the paragraphs. Also you had concluded the essay in the second paragraph which should not be done.
The given bar chart compares the proportion of households that owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, most owned
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