IELTS Letter to Accommodation Officer
Please can you rate my GT Writing Task 1:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.
In the letter,
•Describe the situation
•Explain your problems and why is it difficult to work
•Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Accommodation Officer,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about the various problems I am facing with the room I am living in. I am sharing this accommodation with another personm which I found difficult to live with and all this is hampering my work too.
The major problem with shared accommodation is no two persons are alike and their thoughts do not match. We have have very different styles of living. i work in morning shift ( 9 AM till 6 PM) and my roommate works in day shift (1PM – 10 PM). Whne he gets back to home he watches Television and carries on with his stuff but all these activities of him disturb me a lot. He sleep late and I have to wake up early, therefor, I am unable to sleep properly. All this is affecting my efficiency at work.
I would therefor, request you to please provide me a single room accommodation to help me survive better.
IELTS Letter - Problems with a Rented House
You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that needs fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter:
- explain your situation
- describe the problems with the house
- say what you would like to happen
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, with two of my flat mates, are living in a 4-bedroom house and are facing several issues with the house that needs to be repaired.
One Glass Window had broken during the storm and requires repair as we can't close it properly. The lock of the drawing room's balcony door is not working since we rented the house, requires replacement. And there is a leakage of water in the kitchen's wash area. The water trips down to the cupboard below the basin that keeps the cupboard wet, moist and dirty. This needs to be sealed by a good water sealant so that water doesn't flow down to cupboard.
Also, we are looking for one more student who can share our 4th bedroom(spare) since the current rent of the house is bit expensive. Your help would be much appreciated in searching for our new flat mate and getting the repairs done as soon as possible.
(Please help me to know what grade I should expect in this task and what are my mistakes)
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