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IELTS Line Graph Daily Temperatures

by Sultan
(Kazakhstan)


Hi buddies!

Could you please help me and check the writing task 1 below?

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The line graph illustrates what average daily maximum temperatures were registered in comparison between two New Zealand cities – Auckland and Christchurch, and two cities in the UK – London and Edinburgh. The highest average temperatures for New Zealand cities are experienced mostly in winter months, while the hottest period for the United Kingdom is summer.

The graph of the temperatures for New Zealand cities has very strong similarities: both graphs starts from their peak in January with average 22-23 °C temperature. Then the temperatures decline and reach their bottom levels in summer months. After that it becomes warmer and temperature goes upward at the end of the year and raise to 20-21°C in December.

On the other hand, temperatures at the UK cities starts from their lowest levels in January with approximately 7 degrees (Celsius). There is a steady increase, until it reaches the peak with over 20°C and 15°C for London and Edinburgh respectively. Then temperatures decrease constantly and reach another lowest level (5°C) in December.

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Jun 06, 2018
 conclusion
by: yosa

Do we need to add a conclusion?
Jun 07, 2018
 conclusion
by: IELTS buddy

No, but you need an overview, which can be at the beginning, or as a conclusion, or even as topic sentences.

Take a look at the Task 1 lessons on this site and the model answers and you will see.
Jun 19, 2018
 comparison
by: ABCD

If I am not sure that two cities are of one country and other two are of one country, also i dont know that which city is of which country, and also question is silent on this, then how to compare or write ansewer? should i write/compare all four cities seperately.
Jun 19, 2018
 comparison
by: IELTS buddy

It's quite difficult to understand your question.
Sep 02, 2018
 comparison
by: Anonymous

according to bro ABCD, if someone doesn't know which city belongs to New zealand and vice versa, then, how is he supposed to approach such question? I mean can he just compare all these four cites with each others?
Sep 08, 2018
 comparison
by: IELTS buddy

You can still just compare the cities without mentioning the countries.

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