IELTS Line Graph Daily Temperatures
Could you please help me and check the writing task 1 below?
The line graph illustrates what average daily maximum temperatures were registered in comparison between two New Zealand cities – Auckland and Christchurch, and two cities in the UK – London and Edinburgh. The highest average temperatures for New Zealand cities are experienced mostly in winter months, while the hottest period for the United Kingdom is summer.
The graph of the temperatures for New Zealand cities has very strong similarities: both graphs starts from their peak in January with average 22-23 °C temperature. Then the temperatures decline and reach their bottom levels in summer months. After that it becomes warmer and temperature goes upward at the end of the year and raise to 20-21°C in December.
On the other hand, temperatures at the UK cities starts from their lowest levels in January with approximately 7 degrees (Celsius). There is a steady increase, until it reaches the peak with over 20°C and 15°C for London and Edinburgh respectively. Then temperatures decrease constantly and reach another lowest level (5°C) in December.