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Aug 09, 2016
Missing Factors
by: Ahsan

Coherence and cohesion is missing. Although you have been communicating your idea throughout the texts, I think you can introduce more clarity to it.

Repetitions are there and most importantly, the grammatical structures are improper. You might get 4.5-5 band on this writing.

Best of luck.

Aug 15, 2016
Title
by: atiehsadat

Dear,

Would you send to my email (atiehtabatabaiy@gmail.com) the most common academic subject and correct it please!

Thank you for your time and attention.

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