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Nov 06, 2014
 The eating habits and lifestyles of children
by: IELTS buddy

The strong points of this essay are the ideas and organisation. They could be improved but they are generally ok.

But there are a significant number of grammatical and vocabulary problems that detract from the clarity of your ideas. So you really need to work on this aspect of your writing.

Thanks
Oct 06, 2015
 habits and lifestyle
by: Anonymous

this easy is very good and easy language
May 02, 2016
 Awesoooome😃😃❤💖👍👌
by: Anonymous

Awesooomee....really good essay😁😁😁fantastico!!
Jun 03, 2016
 Can be better
by: Elham

Not that much to the point
Dec 27, 2016
 bbggyug
by: vvv.bad

Just simple, not that much more points to learn.
Oct 29, 2017
 food and health
by: Anonymous

Awesssooomeee

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