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Studying History Essay

In this studying history essay for IELTS you are asked to discuss whether it is better to study local history or world history. 

Take a look at the question:


It is more important for school children to learn about their local history rather than world history. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is an agree / disagree type essay. In these types of essay, you can still look at both sides of the issue, and you can state that you think that it is better to learn both rather than choosing one.

Take a look at the model answer for this question.

Studying History Essay Sample

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

It is more important for school children to learn about their local history rather than world history. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer

While some history lessons in schools focus on the history of the children’s country, others take a more global approach and teach the history of other countries as well. I believe it is important to learn about the past of one’s own country but also the history of the world.

On the one hand, there are benefits to learning the history of one’s own country. It can foster a sense of pride and patriotism for children in the place they have come from by teaching them about the many achievements of their nation over history, such as wars they have won or freedoms gained. It is also important for children to understand where the customs and values of their country have emanated from in order for them to feel that they too would like to continue these into the future. Both of these will mean the children will grow up feeling a sense of belonging to where they have come from. 

On the other hand, it is important to learn about the rest of the world too. Every country has a different history and culture and if children are not taught about this, they will lack the analytical abilities to really understand their own nation and how it compares to other places. Countries are also intertwined in their histories. There have been two World Wars and so it is impossible to fully appreciate these without learning about world history.

All in all, it is paramount that children understand history at both the national and international level. Learning only about one’s own country would result in a very narrow-minded view of the world. 

(272 Words)

Comments

As you can see, in this studying history essay, both points of view are discussed. In the end the writer decides that as there are benefits to both, both should be studied.

The studying history essay would get a high score as it answers the question, it's clearly organised, and it has high levels of accuracy and range in the grammar and vocabulary. 


 

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