This IELTS employing older people essay tackles the issue of whether it it better for employers to hire younger staff rather than those who are older.
This type of topic arises in IELTS writing now again. This is about employing people over 50. Don't mix it up with essays that ask whether people should be forced to retire at a certain age.
Some of the arguments may be the same i.e. the advantages of someone working when they are older, but the question is different.
Employing Older People Essay - Model Answer
Some people believe that due to the rapid changes occurring in modern work places, it is better to employ younger than older people. I do not believe that this is the case.
One argument in support of younger employees is that older employees could be more set in their ways and potentially against any change. To an extent this may be true, but there are many flexible and intelligent workers over 50, while there are inflexible and narrow-minded younger ones. Attitude towards change is a result not of age but of personality type.
That said, physical changes occurring with age could mean certain jobs are more suited to a younger person. For instance, psychologists seem to be in agreement that memory declines with age for people not remaining mentally active. In high-tech industries such as computer programming, where it is so important to be able to work with so much information, numbers and calculations, being younger may be an advantage.
However, older workers have a wide range of other positive attributes that they can bring to their working environment. Generally, they have more work experience than those who are younger. In addition, as can be seen with the trend of many department stores in the UK to take on older people, they are seen to be more reliable and respectful. These are important in any kind of working environment.
In conclusion, therefore, there is not the evidence to support employing young people as opposed to those over 50. It would seem that a mix of the best qualities of old and young is preferential in order to ensure the most productive environment evolves.
This employing older people essay would achieve a high band score.
It fully answers the task by discussing issues around the young and old working and making some comparisons. A clear opinion is also given - the writer believes a mix of young and old is best.
The essay is well-organized and coherent. Each paragraph has a clear topic and linking words between and within paragraphs are used appropriately.
There are examples of less common lexical (vocabulary items) and the writer clearly knows how to collocate.
There are a mix of simple, compound and complex sentences.
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